This is a really fascinating start to what could be a great crime story! You have Wes and Travis down very well and I'd love to see more soon. Please update!

Ah! Travis you poor thing! Please update soon!

Such a good plot!

Oh Snap! Poor Travis. I Guess It's Good & Bad To Have A Lot Of Brothers & Sisters Huh? I Wonder If She's The Killer Or Possibly The Next Victim?
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter! X3

Hmm, Starts Out With A Cracked Lamp & Ends With A Dead, Tortured Body... i Like This Story So Far. I Wonder Who She Is & Who Killed Her?

The plot thickens...Just found your story. Very organic take on their relationship and the included case is interesting, too. I hope you update soon.

Great start. Can't wait to see where this one goes. Hurry back.

It was great I am excites to read more _ keep up the great work

I dig it! I think you write the Travis/Wes dynamic super well. :-)

I like the story! Lookinh forward to the next update!

Awesome beginning! Can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon. Good job on the dialogue between Wes and Travis. It was perfect, just like the show. I am a big fan of the show and I will admit to having a big crush on Warren Kole. I am hoping his character gets back together with his ex. I am a sucker for happy endings.

While reading this chapter, and especially the blurb about the next victim being someone closer to the two of them than they thought, I couldn't help but think you were hinting at Alex... Could her on-line account at that dating website be the source of the problem?

I'm sorry, I am getting ahead of myself here and ahead of you. I apologize and will submit this review and get back to work.

Don't leave me in suspense for long though...