| Reviews for I See The Moon |
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jaz96min 5/22/13 . chapter 12I like it, I didn't know what I would read when i first started but I like it and kept going. Please continued. |
Hachichiyyin 5/21/13 . chapter 12I died laughing. This is awesome. |
Too lazy to sign 5/21/13 . chapter 12 I have never heard the version of the song you wrote, but I DO know a version of it. After a quick Google check, I found the one you know at Lullaby-link dot com slash I-see-the-moon dot html. You can double check to make sure that's right, but I think I got it right. My email is tessaashe at gmail, so you can contact me any time you'd like. |
Scarylady 5/21/13 . chapter 12 I really love this story! It is all kinds of awesome and I am really looking forward to the next chapter. One minor things that's bugging me though-Harry's scars. Even with magical healing he still has a lot of really weird ones that others would be bound to notice (that "I must not tell lies" would be particularly damning) and find curious/disturbing...just a thought. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
Mists of Ribbon 5/20/13 . chapter 12Please update. I know you probably get a whole bunch of these and by this point it's probably getting really irritating, but please. Update. I love this story. You've practically made Harry into a Luna Lovegood- brilliant idea by the way- and then thrown Bruce into the mix with his conflict between his scientific interest in Harry and his 'powers' -which I suspect are actually his magic gone haywire after some traumatic event (Voldemort winning perhaps, then his wand snapped and his friends slaughtered?)- and his overall good hearted Brucey-ness. Then there's Harry's mad antics, of which I find most amusing. Maybe have him steal some of Thor's pop tarts and reveal some magic? I don't know. This is just so cool! Did you get the idea for colors from that one neurological disease I can't remember the name of- it's from A Mango Shaped Space by Wendy Mass- Oh! Synthesia! Did you get it from there? Also, maybe have Harry creep out the rest of the Avengers more, especially Tony or Half-Man. If only for my selfish personal amusement. I like the relationship that you've built for Harry and Bruce. A sort of wish-wash of brother-brother/parent-son love going on there. Very nice. Complex and simple all at the same time. Very well orchestrated. Enough of my rambling. Update sometime soon please! In the meantime, I'm going to go see if you've done any other brilliant work on this blessed site known as . Ta-ta! |
excalibur's fire 5/20/13 . chapter 12Haha, Harry is awesome! |
Guest 5/20/13 . chapter 12 please please continue! this is my new addiction! Harry is really quite perceptive isn't he? and Loki should just back off. |
Valiant Lies 5/20/13 . chapter 12I love this story, I love the writting, I love the Harry you have created. I am very interested to learn more about what happened to Harry and Luna too. I assume that Harry can't speak parsletongue because Voldemort's horcrux is gone. Is it just snakes that don't like him or will it just be monkeys that will help him? I can't wait to read more. Valiant |
acrazysmile 5/19/13 . chapter 12This story is fantastic! I love your broken!harry. I can tell you that he is one of my all time favorite HP fanfic Harrys. And the harry everyone else interaction is fantastic as well. - look forward to your next update. |
bardsgrl4evr 5/19/13 . chapter 12This is a positively wonderful piece I accidently stumbled across looking for a different HP fic on my FF app, but my goodness! This one is sooooo much better. I can't wait to see your next installment. I had to boot up my desktop just so I could fully expressed how great this story is. Absolutely grand! Please, keep up the amazing work. I loved the way Harry's mind is so scattered, and yet, HP fans can see a bit of the logic behind his thoughts & what he says. |
deer-bait 5/19/13 . chapter 12I re-read this just now and it struck me how much i liked this and how much i enjoy your writing style, it's steady pace and the witty dialogue, everything just made this fic fantastic and I love Harry's interactions with everyone and Bruce's interactions with the others too. I was wondering, who do you imagine playing your Bruce? Mark Ruffalo or Edward Norton, or maybe a mixture of both, or maybe even neither or you would rather not choose? Though not gonna lie, all throughout the time I read this, I imagined Norton (though I'm biased because he's one of my favourite actors). Hoping for an update soon, but no rush I guess haha. |
Elelith 5/19/13 . chapter 12I cannot believe I haven't read this fic until now. I put it on my must-read list and I've finally gotten round to it and its awesome and just getting better and better. Broken Harry seeing things no one else can see and trying to warn them in his own way is great. Also: great Tony - love the way nothing fazes him and he doesn't consider normal boundaries. Can't wait for the next chapter.. |
RightArmCannon 5/18/13 . chapter 12Will Harry ever return to normal? |
Silent Avid Magma 5/17/13 . chapter 2Um, magic anyone? Also, if all you are going to do is supplement Harry's personality with Luna's then you might as well just write in Luna instead or an actual original character. Harry isn't Harry if Harry isn't Harry. Yes? Yes. |
Lady of the Shards 5/17/13 . chapter 12*stares* I think if you ever tried to drop this, there would be a riot. So glad you won't. This story…wow. Can't wait to see what happens next. |