YAY~! I LOVE this fic! i REALLY hope you get the next chapter out soon~!! please? *bribes with pocky*

Great story! YOu have real talent.
BTW, about your note...
His name is really Schuldig, despite how other people put it. It means "guilty" in German, so I don't think it's his real name. Just come up with something! ^_^
Hee hee hee hee...Helmut!

This was great!! ^__________^

Ne, Marty-san...how come you haven't continued with this yet!?!?!?!?! ^_^# I was getting ll worked up about it and then...poof...I find there's no other chapter... T-T I really like this pairind and you happen to be one of the really really good weiss kreuz fanfic writers, from what I've seen...CONTINUE!!! ^_^ Please feel considerably rushed by this and update quickly. Just kidding! About the rushed thing...I mean ^_^

Sugeeee!! OmixNagi fic! Pretty! Nummy! ^___^ Yay! Sankyuu for writing this, I feel so special cuz I inspired a fic. ^_^ fun. Anyways, I must do my duties as a fanfiction.net reviewer and review this loverly fic!

Okay, first thing I want to say is that I love what you did to Crawford. Love love love it to death. You put an interesting little twist on him that I've not seen often and it's really fitting. He's the type I see as being anal about stuff, and Weiß is probably one of those things. Especially since he apparently did not see that he couldn't beat them. Plus it also gives the story a nice motivation, which is great ^_^

The parallels you drew between the scnees with Nagi and the scnes with Omi at the beginning were just awesome. It's like you're showing two differen lives that are so similar but different at the exct same time. It's not only really great for setting up the story, but it also shows how Omi and Nagi can kind of bond togehter in that way.

The relationships you tossed in there with Weiß are very nice. It's a sort of 'it all looks okay on the outside, but inside it really isn't' sort of thing that gives your story some extra depth, which is always a nice thing. Shallow stories can stink very much sometimes.

Addressing the writing style, you did a very good job on the limited first person on both ends. When Nagi was kind of out of it, the writing style stayed true to that and our viewpoints were kind of restricted accordingly. Nice job ^_^

Overall, I want moore ^_^ You've got a nice start set up, and I can't wait to see exactly how you throw the relationship in there, considering that it's already got some tension to it.

(as for Schu, I just call him Schu. I've given him a real name for an RPG though, and that's Bertram Schwarz Yeah...I wasn't too creative with the last name, so sue me, I need to think of a new one and I don't know many German last names)

This is really good. I like it a lot and I'm curious to find out what will happen next so please get the next part out soon. I love it.

I really liked this.. ^^

About your question about Schuldich's name. (that's how I spell it at least).. It's kinda an assumed name, I think... no one knows his real name... ^^; At least with Farfarello, we know that his real name is Jei... but with Schuldich.. it's just Schuldich.. I've seen people use other names for him.. the best one that I've seen used in a fanfic was Lukas.. ^^ Hope that helps!