|Reviews for Secret in Hiding|
| klaralouw 9/16/12 . chapter 13
Wow this was a great story! I love it, and also I've read some of TSC season 2,,, amazing! Thanks for writing this:)
| VampireHybridFangs 8/26/12 . chapter 13
| Daddy's Little Pyro 8/6/12 . chapter 12
Man, this just keeps getting crazier and crazier. Cassie and Diana angry...Claire and Dylan, who I feel bad for...and Lucas and Ryder, who I feel some hatred for...a small part of me feels some contempt for Cassie and Diana. But it's interesting and very believable that their father would love them the most.
I can't wait for the next chapter :]
| Alecks454 8/5/12 . chapter 13
LOL! Of course i am going to review! I always do don't I? But yeah great chapter! I don't know who i trust but all IK is that i still love evil Cassie and Diana. Also some of the things you posted in this chapter seems like youcould of got it from the book. THat is if you read the book... Anyway Thanks for the shout out it means alot! Yes we do have different taste in couples but i will learn to get over it cause couples are not the main point in THIS story. Also PH a PLL and TSC crossover? They are in my top 5 of favorite series book along with twilight and the house fo night series! Have you read that? Anyway can;t wait tell the next chapter!
| Circle Fan 8/5/12 . chapter 13
Oh no not the final chapter! Loved that they all got their crystals back, also that the Elders gave their powers to their kids. I've read a few ideas about how Diana could be bound when her dad wasn't a Meade and your idea fits pretty well. Honestly it does feel a bit thrown in there as your response to what other people are coming up with but I still liked reading it and I'm glad you included it. Also I'm glad that you didn't redeem Cassie and Diana completely, it couldn't happen overnight and it's more interesting this way, also it's a great set up for a sequel if you ever decide to do one.
You've done a great job with this story, it's been a blast to read and I'm sad it's over. Thanks for coming up with such an interesting idea and seeing it through to the end. I kinda want to know what happens next but I think you're right to stop here. This is the first Secret Circle fanfic I've reviewed and it caught my interest because of the concept and the way you kept everyone in character. I also liked that you didn't demonize the adults or waste too much time on shipping, or on the other Balcoins.
Think I mentioned a few times that I hated that you killed Henry, haha. In the end though I liked that you stuck so closely to the story of the show because it made this one more believable.
Really well done. I'll be looking out for more from you in the future.
| Alecks454 8/1/12 . chapter 12
Great chapter but i hope even if they do bound Cassie and Diana stay evil1
| Circle Fan 7/25/12 . chapter 11
Great chapter, things are heating up now and getting really exciting. I loved the chess convo and also Faye getting a daddy moment with Charles, and Blackwell being all caring in his own evil way with his kids at the end. Also I'm getting kinda curious about whether the brats have got any powers like their big sis. I don't see how the circle can stop the Balcoins, even with the Elders to help. Cassie and Diana seem too brainwashed to switch sides, unless something changes and they kill Blackwell themselves the way they did in the show.
Anyways, I liked this a lot, even though you killed Henry, haha. Keep them coming.
| Daddy's Little Pyro 7/24/12 . chapter 11
Hmmm...Blackwell really cares for his daughters. But I wonder wha the almighty dark magic user has in store for them now...great chapter :] I look forward to the next
| Alecks454 7/24/12 . chapter 11
When Henry died and Faye said Grandpa and No it did not have an exclamation point. So it made it seem that she did not care that much and was not sad at all. Same thing for when Claire and Dylan yelled there sisters name no exclamation! You need to be careful with those and start using them. But other then that i love the chapter! John is so sweet to Cassie and Diana i love it! Go Balcoins or Blackwells!
| Daddy's Little Pyro 7/24/12 . chapter 10
Someone's gonna die? Who? Great chapter, by the way. You execute all of the action in this story flawlessly. I can't wait for the next chapter :]
| Vicki219 7/21/12 . chapter 10
Wow, cool story!
| Alecks454 7/21/12 . chapter 10
I hope they save Cassie and Diana. Idk why but i am on the side of dark magic but in the show and story i am against i mean you know being evil but here i like it!
| Daddy's Little Pyro 7/17/12 . chapter 9
Never believed it for a second. His death was a little TOO convenient. Glad everyone is finally seeing Diana and Cassie aren't the kids they lost years ago. Great chapter. The ending shocked me - I never thought he would kidnap his other kids. Can't wait for the next chapter :]
| Adelkis Garcia 7/16/12 . chapter 9
| Alecks454 7/16/12 . chapter 9
I think i said the already but i will say it again kill Kate i never liked her after what she did to Cassie on the show. Aalso in the story. Oh and at first i thought John would be dead but i was not to sure so it was a 50-50 chance for me! I like the evil girls! And i hope that love does not change them cause then that will show they are weak! Oh and episode 7 was great i forgot to review it if i have time i will do that later!