Can u please hurry up and write more i love your work

Blue Torpedo 6/21/12 ch10

I really like this so update soon! Btw I got this of another story.

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SAVE THE STORIES!

Seriously, cut the crap. This story is crap, in fact. That's why you barely have any reviews. The summary is bad, your writing is incorrect and makes people dizzy just reading it. Get a beta reader, call in some sort of help coz you need it. Your punctuation, grammar and spelling is certainly horrible. Plus, your OCs are Mary Sues and your story is against the rules. Technically, OC stories are against the rules.

Of course Robin doesn't have a sister who's a villain. Heck, you want to write about this then go on FictionPress instead.

You need to majorly revise EVERYTHING. You can't write. Admit it, that's the first step to a solution.

And say anything back to this, I don't have to res

This isn't bad stuff but you should drop the "_'s POV" stuff and just write transitions. It's not that hard. you can obviously do it.

Aw I love your story what's in Sara?is it a demon of some sort or what I gott a know lol update soon

She can be like yin and yang mushed into one body. Jade,the evil villan can be yang and Sarah can be yin. But jade gets more powerfull than Sara and the two personalitys can end up fighting for controll over Sarah's body. So she goes to robin for help.