This made me laugh SO much.

Cannot describe the thoughts I am thinking at this moment... *nosebleed*

awesome story

Wow! I LOVE this! Can't wait for this fic's sequel!

OMIGOSH. I've never even THOUGHT of this couple until you brought it up. It's ahmazing. Your words flow easily and I laughed the entire time

Haha- my new obsession: ByakuyaxKarin ;)

So much win XD Great job! Looking forward to the sequel!

this was funny and i really liked it, cant wait for that sequel.

AHHHHHH! this is AMAZING!
I was laughing the whole entire time, honestly!
I was hoping the day would come when someone would write a ByaKarin FF again. I love writing "Unconventional Unions", but it's not nearly as fun to read my own FF.

This story is amazing. Honestly, With stories like this one out, ByaKarin is going to get a lot of Shippers!

I'm glad you made Karin part of the 11th squad. Honestly, every time I think about Karin as a Shinigami, I always picture her being an 11th Division member. Her and Tatsuki. She's got the attitude necessary to handle a crowd like that.

I like the details you included in the story, and that Reiatsu supressing device is really neat! I like that you made the advantages and disadvantages of it realistic, and it put Karin to a disadvantage that really helped the plot development of the chapter. Karin going ninja mode in the Kuchiki Mansion had me so anxious!

Karin and Byakuya's interaction had me rolling! They're so hilarious together honestly! I don't think anyone who is gay might take offense to the jokes. They were totally harmless and hilarious; all you really did was call Byakuya effeminate.
Karin must've gotten an eyeful eh ;)?
I like the fact that you made it so Karin isn't familiar with what Byakuya looks like. That was a great move, and it added to the realism and suspense to the overall plot!
I can't wait to see what'll happen when she finds out who that naked 'servant' was.

The way you portrayed Yoruichi and Rangiku reminds me a bit of "Shinigami Women's Secret Society" it's a really funny smut FF by Kell-D, and I love it! Those two's scheming really cracks me up, and If they were ever friends in Canon fics, I would imagine them getting on like that.

I personally don't have a problem with the cursing... Like you said, she is an 11th Division member, and based on Karin's behaviour in the canon, it's really likely that as an older teen she'd end up using profanity a whole lot. She's a tough, rowdy girl.

The last part of the chapter absolutely killed me, Byakuya's so vindictive!
More chapters PLEASE! I'm officially hooked.

My legion of Writers block exorcising priests are on standby if you ever need them. Please don't give up on this one!

Cheers,
Truthfulpen

i want more!

wow wow ...so in other words ... wow!

the best thing ever and my god karin is so vicious.

*waits for another chapter*

Okay its good, i liked it but please space the words that are at the start.

Its hard to read them and puts people off.