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FiOeX 5/19/13 . chapter 3Love the story! I almost cried when i realized there wasn't another chapter! Looking forward to what you've got planned |
Guest 3/20/13 . chapter 1 Any hope of this being continued? |
Reader-anonymous-writer 3/20/13 . chapter 3"I believe you have been woefully ill-informed about what it takes to hold a conversation." The voice sounded disjointed and monotone. Loki, looking surprised by it, let out a small laugh, and waved his hand. Amused. "Duller?" Tony repeated, letting himself grin. "If you ever want to visit again, bring some of that and I won't try and kick you out." Loki smiled. It was wan, but sincere. Nice. "Yeah?" Stark brought the glass to his lips, wincing slightly as the alcohol within seemed to burn him. "Well, I'll be dead before you leave with it." Loki arched a brow. Obi... "I can't believe you didn't mean to kill me." "Had I been informed of the power source's true purpose, I might not have made the mistake." He sounded a little indignant. "Well, I wasn't about to tell you I had an on-and-off switch." Necessity, not whim. "The same one you have." Loki told him firmly, before Tony could even continue. So much for getting the blueprints to know what kind of monstrosity Loki was creating. Interesting. Why would Loki wish to create a replica of Iron Man suit? A decoy? Does Thanos look for Tony, the one who carried nuke into the portal? Good day, good night, and good luck, Loki. |
Guest 12/29/12 . chapter 3 Poor Bruce... |
robby1925 11/15/12 . chapter 3 I'm really enjoying this. Loved the Bruce part, you did a good job writing him and your Tony is perfect. I can't wait to read more. I hope you haven't dropped it. |
ORgasmicPigeon 10/21/12 . chapter 3Awesome eeee! Waiting for an update hopefully? :) |
samiam13 10/17/12 . chapter 3i love this fanfic to! (i'm a fan of Crush :) ) great job and i hope you update soon! :D |
Potkanka 9/22/12 . chapter 3I really like this story, it's so well written, I especially like Tony's witty remarks. And that weird relationship with Loki - not really friends at all, but not really enemies either, athought it's getting better and then worse again... It has great potential, I hope you won't abandon this fic :) Just one request though: Don't let it become slash, please! I see you already have one FrostIron fic, so let this be just... a friendship fic (well, evnetually, as I said, they don't really seem like friends yet :D ). I don't like Avengers slash so I'd have to stop reading and I really like it so far... (Is that emotional blackmailing? XD ) |
Amberleaf le Haunt 9/2/12 . chapter 2Ahaha, poor Tony! :P Loki's mean. I loved it when he tried to get away in his car and Loki just teleports to find him! XD At least it *wasn't* some crappy thing that would just stall as soon as he tried to get away... LOL. I wonder if his cars are manual transmission? /random |
Amberleaf le Haunt 9/1/12 . chapter 3Haha, nice! _; Please, do continue! :) Although I had an intensely terrifying dream about being kidnapped in Walmart last night so this last chapter was kind of a little hard to read (I read the other two last night). ;c Heheh. ;;; |
Soletta 8/28/12 . chapter 3I loved the choice of Bruce and the sentence "Hell of a time for the cat-brain to re-assert itself" may have made me giggle like crazy. Fantastic story. The story you are looking for may be 'Metal heart' by tonystarktheautobot. It sounds like the scene in the third chapter. Hope that helps :) |
reckless is a wreck 8/27/12 . chapter 3Oh, I am enjoying this so far! Lots better than I expected :) I am glad I chose t read it and I am looking forward to more :) |
Hexalys 8/27/12 . chapter 3I'm so happy to see that your back and that you know which direction you want to take your story in. I really do love how you've written everyone so far, you did Bruce's POV wonderfully! I feel bad for Tony right now, while he isn't exactly in the same dire situation he'd been in last time he was held hostage, this will still no doubt bring back bad memories. I can't wait for the next update! |
Roara chan 8/27/12 . chapter 3Oh yay, a plot! Those are always fun. This was great and now that you've actually got a direction your headed in I can't wait to see how this develops. Update soon, (or not, as long as it's awesome) I can't wait for more more. Roara-chan |
Just A Comment 8/10/12 . chapter 2 Wow, afyer going through over a dozen really dull/cliche/poorly written stories, this one is a breath of fresh air; I'm comletely wrapped up in this story! Your characterization of the characters - from Loki's curiosity and I-don't-even-know-what to Tony snark and cynicism - is pheunominal. I am very impatient for a third chapter (which Avenger crashed the party? Will there be a fight? /Will Loki get the pizza?/), so please, please keep writing! Personally, I hope this stays (at least between Tony and Loki) as a (potential) friendship instead of slash. It's easy to find a lot of bad slash but hard to find a really good friendship story between these two. Whatever your choice though, I eagerly await more! |