This was a very exciting chapter. I like the tension and their interaction. It was a great move by her, but of course she can't succeed... Write more? Please!

I love this story, and really wish the movie was more like this. Please update soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

This chapter escalated fast! I like the action and quick thinking on Lisa's part. Bring on chapter 4!

Wow! What an awesome story so far! Please please please update. It is wicked action packed. Can't wait to read more.

ooh! This is exciting! Update soon!

I am really enjoying this. I love this take on 'what if'. I've always liked how they always had to stay so close together (in my opinion he's much more threatening this way) and you've written it beautifully. I was wondering how you were going to make her fake the call and you really surprised me. That was fantastic! I really hope you update soon!

Keep going

Though the cussing could be toned down or left out

Fantastic, great twist on the original story, excited to find out how different the repercussions will be in this scenario.

Update soon! :)

Love it! Please continue writing this and soon! :)

long time to upload.. but nevertheless a really god chapter ! keep going...

Awesome original flavor in with the characters we all love. Great job! hope you update again soon!

Great chapter as always, thank you for updating. I liked how Lisa played Jackson, just unfortunate it back fired, but at least her dad is safe. I loved the tension between Lisa and Jackson, and how you are writing the characters true. Cannot wait for the next chapter, and seeing what Jackson is going to do to Lisa! :D

Great idea! Interested in how you will delay the phone call and her escape attempts :)

PLEASE UPDATE this is getting really good.

Wahhh! This is so great. Keep going, please!