Great story. Wonderful. Don't stop writing.
The Green Fairy

Hi. One thing on the last chapter. "Wich" is not what you should say. "wich" should be "which". Kay?
The Green Fairy

It's me, again. More corrections. PLEASE DON'T HATE ME YOU'RE A WONDERFUL WRITER!! Your grammar just needs a little work.
You spell the word mysteriously, "mysteriously".
Okay?
Bye,
The Green Fairy
P.S. Please don't use *no trouble* in this context. It is any trouble. "You didn't cause *no* trouble for my daughter but have caused me a little headache but it'll pass"said Alanis.

I'm sorry, but I have this thought. I am just trying to help, don't get mad at me. I have to correct writing when things are incorrect.
"'I would love to say I did it, but I called Migdalia for help and she ended up doing everything.'Christian said." Is they way the should be phrased, don't hate me. I'm just trying to help!!
" "I would love to say I did it but I called Migdalia for help and she ended up doing everything"said Christian." Is they way you phrased it. Now, I'm not trying to correct you story, just you grammar.
Please, after a character says something, put a space between what they say and who said it.
The Green Fairy

Very, very weird, but I've got to admit, it hooked me.

Please write a sequel this is a wonderful story!!!It brought me to tears the first time I read it I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

i love it!!!!! cuteeeeeee!!!! i like alana of what she did, she's not selfish at all, i like that :)

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, but it's not fair!!! one month!!!!!!!

i like the way you descrive christian's feelings :) i wil lcointinue reading now ^^ this is the first fic i read about MR so you can be flattered ;) you caught my attention!!! :)

WOW WOW WOW! Ok..I am gripping my seat and WAITING for chapter 10! NOW! Oh wow, this is a wonderfully original, unique, spectacular spectacular story!! I LOVE the way you've brought the characters (And yes I am soooo in love with Christian! *smiles*) through time in a story that is not all happy thoughts..I am waiting...not so patiently for more...How will it end? Please write it soon so I can stop biting my nails off! Great Grand Good!

WOW WOW WOW! Ok..I am gripping my seat and WAITING for chapter 10! NOW! Oh wow, this is a wonderfully original, unique, spectacular spectacular story!! I LOVE the way you've brought the characters (And yes I am soooo in love with Christian! *smiles*) through time in a story that is not all happy thoughts..I am waiting...not so patiently for more...How will it end? Please write it soon so I can stop biting my nails off! Great Grand Good!

hmm... i really don´t hope this angel is going to seperate Christian & Satine. *sigh*
PWEASE go on - you allready have a fan in me---

Great story!! Very different (I LUV IT) ...
Very well written...*you have a huge talent*
it just keeps getting better and better...Can't wait for the next chapter! ;)