|Reviews for Introduction|
| WolfQueen110 8/29/12 . chapter 4
Is there any chance to have more? :D
| MolotovMimi 6/22/12 . chapter 3
| MolotovMimi 6/22/12 . chapter 2
I really want to like this because the writing is good and they are really interesting characters, but I don't think they'd have this conversation.
Remember it's the late 1490s. She's rather religious and he can be burnt to a crisp for the whole not-into-boobies thing. Why would he trust her with confirmation of this HUGE vulnerability of his? In plain english! Maybe if the dialogue was more guarded (admitting something without spelling it out)...
I love that they have this conversation, but I don't quite buy that it'd ever happen.
| stilljustme 6/22/12 . chapter 3
Great! I can't find the right words, but the way you write this is just amazing. You truly write Borgia(-language), my lady!
| Haruka Tenou Distant Sky King 6/17/12 . chapter 1
Conversation between the two would be very interesting to see... And her discovering his secret would be amazing... So yes, I approve, and would really like to see more.
| Queen of War 6/16/12 . chapter 1
Interesting premise. These two could have some cool, creepy conversations. Maybe Lu could wonder about Miccy's secret and Giulia could clue her in? "He's one of the few men I do not share blood with that I feel I can trust not to look at me as an object." "Yeah, there's a reason for that..."
I liked Cesare's reluctance to introduce the two. It's a little peek into his mind and how he sees these two. Looking forward to more.
| stilljustme 6/16/12 . chapter 1
hey, that was great! I also say, yes, keep on writing please! You totally get the characters, and you describe them so well with just a few words...really, really, good. Please keep on writing!
| blackestnight10 6/14/12 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this little piece. I had always thought, with the way Micheletto is constantly at Cesare's side that Lucrezia would have to had seen him at some point and I wondered what that encounter would be like. And it makes total sense that the two would meet; in the last episode that aired last week we even saw Micheletto inside their home, so clearly he's earned his place. Juan knew about him, so why not Lucrezia?
I say yes, expand on this piece. Even if it's just little bits here and there that would work perfectly. You don't have to write a full-on story, I'm certainly not with mine haha. I think when it comes to fanfiction for the Borgias, one of the best formats is to write little episodes, such as the one you've written here, and weave them together through the characters.
I will be checking back here regularly to see what you decide to do :)