Huh. Seems interesting.

Yeah, the reunification is a little silly, but this doesn't shock, it's even kind of funny (For the hex when Marcia use a sock, I mean).

But I don't think she is so cruel, even if these men are... evil.

Nevertheless, I really like the title of the chapter.

Your story kind of sucks. you shouldnt realy be writing

Great opening for your new story !

I like the idea of the wolf. It reminds me an other fiction story I read, but I definitely prefer this.

I also appreciate that you know the meaning of number six, and that you use it here. So the seven floor of the tower is special, too ?

And I think you have to revise your irregular verbs... :)

See you !