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Tiger Warrior09 4/8/13 . chapter 1Aww! Cute! And decently belivable with the teens. It is a cool idea and this is the start o a great story if you expand on this. TigerWarrior |
Iresha 11/28/12 . chapter 1I thought they had a son named Oliver from the original trilogy |
Critical reader 10/1/12 . chapter 1 May the odd be ever in their favor. Really this isn't the hunger games |
Critical reader 9/22/12 . chapter 1 Dumb! Doesn't fallow the book at all. First off Loki and Wendy have a son Oliver. Second Loki is 27 because if you read vittra attacks ( the bonus story to switched) you would know Loki says he's 24. Plus he says he was in elora and Oren's wedding witch was before Wendy was born. Lastly Wendy makes a comment in ever after ( the bonus story to ascend) that she feels uncomfortable not wearing a dress and Loki would NEVER make a joke about divorcing Wendy he would die for her literally ( as seen in ascend) |
CanadianGirl123 8/29/12 . chapter 1Please Please Update Soon! This is really good (: |
NessieloveJake 8/28/12 . chapter 1 I'm just saying that in Ascend when Wendy and Loki had a child they had a boy and his name was Oliver I do like the fact that you put in a daughter though I think it's really cute |
beth 7/26/12 . chapter 1 o my gosh I lovvvvvve this write more please please write more ! |
Guest 7/1/12 . chapter 1 wow i wish there was more please try to make more i love the story it is amazing |
AussieGirl16 6/28/12 . chapter 1love it!please please update soon |