You don't stink as an author! You have to complete this! I was so looking forward to see what would spark with BG and what's-his-name and the hidden trials living with the Wickershams/ without her sisters. Please overcome that Writer's Block, you have to! :D

OMG I HATE WRITER'S BLOCK! *swats it away* lol

Anyways... It's finished. :( Aw, boo. Well it was amazing, but I just have to say... character development? I don't know, but I think I would've liked to know more about her sisters. The character development for B.G. was actually pretty good. :P But I'd just like to know what it was like for her siblings. :) Haha, long review, sorry! All those peer responses are really getting annoying in school, you know? ;D

So, amazing. *applause* I can't wait until the next chapter of The Way of the Mermaid comes out, mixaholic. :D

i have no idea what's going on, but i donno about the glasses thang. havent got the email in several months now.

OOOH. MAAAAAN. B.G. RAN AWAY. What's gonna happen next? :D

Oh, and LOL. I loved the prank and Trebun's reaction to B.G. not going on the date.

The Bird Girls never had much personality; I love the premise of this!
I think it would be great if B.G. befriended Gertrude, sorry if that's a bad idea.

I've got a name for a Wickersham bro! It's...Skipper! Yeah that was the first name that came to my mind since I just watched Madagascar 3 today and I really like the lead

*finish reading author's note at the end*

I think... OWWW MY TEETH! lol. jk.

So, there are a few grammatical errors here and there (like with quotation marks, spaces, commas, etc...).

Oh, and did you purposely put "Amayzing" instead of "amazing"?

Anyways... awesome start and I hope you update soon!