|Reviews for HOTD season 2: Revolution DEADsquad|
| alex 988 3/14/13 . chapter 13
Can't wait for chapter 14!
| alex 988 3/14/13 . chapter 13
Great story gravenimage can't
| PurpleDiamondDevil 3/12/13 . chapter 13
Epic can't wait for next chapter. I have down loaded all the songs mentioned and they are fantabulous. My favorite song is 'shoot shoot shoot your guns, kill them all now, bang bang bang life's but a scream" props amaz-balls with Harry Styles extra nipples on top.
| AnimeOtaku18 2/4/13 . chapter 1
Love the story but I think that it should have been Saeko who got bit because we all know what Takashi will do if Rei got bit plus I would like to see his reaction and it would have built a stronger bond between Daisuke and Saeko. But Love the Story! Please continue
| DeluxeMagnum69 11/28/12 . chapter 2
Villan OC form! :D
(Evil Version of my OC) [Differences: Age, Past, Hair, some stuff] Check my profile or PM me.
[Had no real name] Name (given by scientists): Skylar
Called by friend [form below]: Riot
Weight: 240 lbs
Eye color: N/A
Hair color: Black
Body type: Massive, tough with a lot of muscle.
Family: N/A But has a friend that is like a brother
Main weapon: A heavy indestructible Riot Shield
Sub weapon: Knives
Personality: Cold, vile and tough. Will show no mercy no matter who it is.
Background: Tested in a lab, Riot turned powerful with a lot of strength. He also has a companion that was also tested. (form below) Killing the people testing on him, he managed to escape with his friend and got military gear.
Also immune to friend’s poison.
Likes: Solitude, strength,
Dislikes: One ruling power, the undead, all other humans except Nightshade.
Clothing/Gear: Bulletproof kevlar vests, shields, a heavy durable helmet with a visor.
Armored helmet, covering whole face with gear.
Armored shoulders, chest, arms, back, legs, thighs, feet, everywhere!
Gloved hands, all in black.
A heavy Riot Shield and knives.
A giant pack to store things.
[Had no real name] Name (given by scientists): Hemlock
Called by Riot: Nightshade
Weight: 185 lbs
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Green
Body type: Tall, slender form
Family: N/A But has a friend, Riot, that is like a brother
Main weapon: A powerful L115A3 AWM sniper rifle
Sub weapon: Bow and arrows. The bow has a hidden blade, excellent for close combat. And loves to use poison. Thus the arrows had poison. A poisoned knife.
Personality: A cold cruel personality and joke around sometimes. Loves to have battle from afar. An excellent marksmen, fast and quiet in the shadows.
Background: Tested in a lab, Nightshade turned fast and cunning with good reflexes. Scientists tested on Nightshade so that he can secrete deadly poison. Killing the people testing on him, he managed to escape with Riot and got military gear.
Also immune to own poison.
Likes: Long range battles, screams of victims, poisons, killing from afar
Dislikes: Close range battles, the undead, all humans except Riot
Clothing/Gear: Ghillie suit, Gloves, gas mask, binoculars, military gear stuff etc...
PM me for questions and what not!
| kactaplb 10/3/12 . chapter 1
| PrayerGirl 9/11/12 . chapter 11
this chapter was realy good
| PrayerGirl 9/10/12 . chapter 10
well I figerd it out pretty fast but it was still realy good and heart warming and that last part with ishida was realy funny lol :)
| DarkWatcher219 9/6/12 . chapter 13
Can't wait for Chapter 13 :D
| DarkWatcher219 9/6/12 . chapter 10
Name: Asami Osada
Weight: 137 lbs
Eye color: Grey
Hair color: Black
Body type: Slender bordering on thin
Breasts size: C Cup
Family: Mother and Father both deceased
Main weapon: Genesis Virus/E-Strain (The E-Strain is a chemical that Asami created herself to gain limited control over creatures and individuals infected by the Genesis Virus while at the same time modifying the virus itself to give abilities to creatures infected such as if Asami were to inject a person infected with Genesis they would gain the ability to run and their strength would grow considerably along with their endurance)
Sub weapon: a Browning Hi-Power 9mm pistol
Personality: Asami is a workaholic in almost every meaning of the word she is always attempting to research new ways to make the Genesis Virus better and by better she means more dangerous and destructive. If she ever was to meet an enemy she'd likely be annoyed and say they are wasting her time. Time she could be using perfecting the Genesis Virus. To Allies she is almost the same way as she will often try to avoid small talk and stay cooped up in her lab and only go out when she needs fresh samples of the Genesis Virus
Background: Asami was the daughter of two of the original researchers for the Genesis Virus Maki Osada and Saito Osada. As a child Asami often spent time in the lab with her parents and quickly learned chemistry and bio genetic research by the time she was 18 she had become an assistant to her parents helping them develop the Genesis Virus. One day her parents got into an argument on testing the Genesis virus her father Saito wanted to skip straight to human testing while her mother Maki believed it was too early to test Genesis. Asami made the decision for them and locked them both in their lab and released Genesis into the air in the lab killing them both. When Asami saw what happened to her parents as they rose again she saw the potential use for it and told no one what Genesis really did. After disposing of both of her reanimated parents she took their position on the research team and began research into advancing the bio-weapon aspect of Genesis turning it into what it is today.
(Optional to use I hope it fits in with your story -)
Usual clothing: Asami in the lab often wears a white lab coat a pair of black high heels and white blouse and black skirt along with a pair of librarian like glasses,
When out in the field she wears a black Kevlar stitched jumpsuit with leather sewn into the arms and legs along with a pair of combat boots and black gloves.
Any accessories like scars or tattoos: None
If they have a pet companion: A pack of Genesis Strain infected dogs she managed to control with an advanced version of the Genesis E-Strain virus
( I really like your story I hope you post another chapter up soon :D)
| DarkWatcher219 9/6/12 . chapter 9
Name: Hayato Okaijima
Age: 29 1/2
Weight: 165 lbs
Eye color: Amber
Body type: Lean with a bit of muscle
Main weapon: DSR-1 loaded with .338 Lapua Magnum Rounds
Sub weapon: MP7 Personal Defense Weapon with 40 round 4.7mm magazines he carries on a sling and a H&K USP.45 Handgun in underarm holster
Personality: Hayato is slightly bitter and has a sadistic sense of humor as he takes enjoyment out of tormenting others. He is often easily bored and will sometimes kill something or someone just for the fun of it. With Allies he isn't afraid to speak his mind often voicing his opinions on someone the moment he meets them and to enemies he is likely to do the same except in pointing out all of their flaws and likely throwing in an insult
Family: All of his immediate family were killed during the outbreak not that he really cares
Background: Hayato was once the top sniper in Japan's military being part of a special group known as the B.S.T.G.A group of elite soldiers trained to go into foreign countries and carry out operations against dictators or terrorists and even governments when required. On an operation in Afghanistan with his team an RPG struck the SUV he was riding causing it to flip into a ravine and in the process ruining his left eye with shrapnel. After surviving where all his team didn't he proceeded to hunt down his target through the hills of Afghanistan for 4 days until he finally killed him and signaled for evacuation. When he returned to Japan he was dismissed from duty under the reasoning that without his left eye he would no longer be able to operate properly as a sniper. This enraged Hayato as it meant his position as Top Sniper In Japan was given to someone else namely Ishida Itadaka. Still willing to prove his skills as a Sniper he joined EDEN when offered a position within the organization.
(You can use this if you want up to you -)
Usual clothing: He'll often be wearing a Black Combat vest with a Black Muscle shirt and Black Cargo pants with combat boots he'll also have a pair of finger-less gloves and an eye patch over his left eye
Accessories like scars or tattoos: scar that crosses over his left eye and multiple burns on his arms and back
Pets: A Black Raven named Tsubachi (Roughly translated to- Bloodwing) he trained to flush out targets by making noise which also calls the infected allowing Hayato to find his targets easier
| DeluxeMagnum69 9/3/12 . chapter 13
Awesome story! Keep writing! Got my PM message?
| Guest 7 8/19/12 . chapter 12
i know you already added the other characters but hey making one myself was fun so i decided to tell you my ideas and if you like them enough then add him in if you want
*Name: Kazaki Homura (Zaki for short)
*Sex: Male (straight)
*Eye color: Red
*Hair Color: Black (sorta like Luffy's form the anime One Piece)
*Body Type: sorta like Takashi's but a little bit more built
*Main Weapon: Dual wield Machette
*Sub Weapon: Desert Eagle
*Personality: Childish and funny but can be mature when needed be, and in battle he is sorta like Seako but he just loves a good fight so he doesnt lose it like Seako does sometimes
*Family: He is in the same boat as Takishi and Rei, He didnt find his mom when the mess started, and his dad died sacrificing himself saving his STRB squad members and a rookie Ishada. Also he is Takashi's cousin and great friend, they got along very well during visits and family reunions. He was also Seako's best freind during elementary school in shibuya (Before she moved to Tokonosu)
*Attire: From down/up- he has black low top sneakers and and jeans he also wears a grey open hoodei with no sleeves and a plain black tee underneath. He also has his fathers custom made dog tags wich are shaped like pirate flag, the tags have his dads STRB info on the front and on the back they have a skull and crossbones, and he has fingerless gloves like Takashi's (if you want you can change it to something simalar but leave the dog tags)
Well there is my character and in my opinion i think it would make the story even better than the greatness it already is if you add him but its your call Mr. or Ms. Author... oh and if you do add him and want him to have a pairing then please let me know and ill think of one probably with a connection to Shizuka and Daisuke. Well thats that, your story is awesome so keep it up and i cant wait for chpt 13
| Guest 8/18/12 . chapter 9
*Name: Kazaki Homura (zaki for short)
*Hair color:Black (kinda like Luffy's from the anime One Piece)
*Body Type:Sorta like Takashi but a little bit more built
*Main Weapon:Dual wield machette
*Sub Weapon:Desert Eagle
*Personality:Childish and funny when they arent fighting(but he also has a mature side to him) and when he is fighting kinda like Seako but driven by anger and not pleasure
*Family:he saw his parents get eaten alive by "them" (the reason for his anger during battle) he is also Takashi's cousin who lives in shibuya and he was Seako's best freind during elementary school
*Attire:from down/up- black converse and jeans, a tactical belt to keep his Deagle Mags, a grey no sleeve hoodie with a plain black tee and he always weres a straw hat, given to him by a traveler that he admired alot (the straw hat is again like luffy's from one piece and if you want you can decide how the traveler gave him the hat if your explainig his back story)
*Accesories: he has a 6 inch scar on his back starting from the top of his right shoulder blade and ends in the bottom of his left shoulder blade given to him by mugger who was threatnig a defenseless Seako with a knife
give me some time and ill think of a female who, if you want, can be this characters pairing
| guest 8/18/12 . chapter 10
nice job very nice your a good writer keep it up