|Reviews for A Tale of What Might Have Been|
| hetaliaforever123 2/18/13 . chapter 5
You finally updated! Yesh!
Oh gosh, your first line break... *sighs and shakes head* Wow. Should've known.
Oh, if only I could dramatize this for a Drama Club next year! I could, and then round up the people from GATE and act this out! Awesome :)
Who is Adam and Dmitri, I wonder? Hmm...
Yeah, I said "hi" to them for you. No worries. They said hi back.
| JediApprentice 2/13/13 . chapter 4
Oh, come on. It's Hamlet. It is supposed to be sad, emotional. But no. You had to step on and make it funny. Anyway, I can't wait the next chapter. I do really enjoy your story.
| hetaliaforever123 7/7/12 . chapter 4
LOL at Josie, er Francisco. She (He!) mistook estevan, er, Fortinbras for a girl! LOL!
Naomi: "Who's Fortinbras?"
Annabel: "An important charatcer in the play Hamlet who shows up in the end and takes the throne."
Violet: "Gee, you sound nerdier than I get whenever I talk about Shakespeare."
Annabel: "I do not! I just grew up under a Shakespeare-loving mother! That's all!"
Um, got to go... my OCs are arguing again. Peace out homie!
Make pasta, not war,
hetaliaforever123 (will soon be signed as "Forever")
| PhoenixGryffin 6/26/12 . chapter 3
Yay! This is awesome! :) And somewhat suspenseful...
| hetaliaforever123 6/24/12 . chapter 3
Love, love, love! I found a few more mistakes that I overlooked... but oh well. I still love it! And hooray for Josie- I mean, Francisco! And Samantha- er, Bernardo- worries about Josie- er, I mean, Francisco- too much. Seriously, I keep mixing them up! XD I absoulutely loved it! You deserve more readers!
Peace out, homie
| hetaliaforever123 6/16/12 . chapter 2
Nice work! Keep it up!
| PhoenixGryffin 6/15/12 . chapter 2
This is awesome, keep writing! :)