You finally updated! Yesh!

Oh gosh, your first line break... *sighs and shakes head* Wow. Should've known.

Oh, if only I could dramatize this for a Drama Club next year! I could, and then round up the people from GATE and act this out! Awesome :)

Who is Adam and Dmitri, I wonder? Hmm...

Yeah, I said "hi" to them for you. No worries. They said hi back.

See ya

-Forever

Oh, come on. It's Hamlet. It is supposed to be sad, emotional. But no. You had to step on and make it funny. Anyway, I can't wait the next chapter. I do really enjoy your story.

LOL at Josie, er Francisco. She (He!) mistook estevan, er, Fortinbras for a girl! LOL!

Naomi: "Who's Fortinbras?"
Annabel: "An important charatcer in the play Hamlet who shows up in the end and takes the throne."
Violet: "Gee, you sound nerdier than I get whenever I talk about Shakespeare."
Annabel: "I do not! I just grew up under a Shakespeare-loving mother! That's all!"

Um, got to go... my OCs are arguing again. Peace out homie!

Make pasta, not war,
hetaliaforever123 (will soon be signed as "Forever")

Yay! This is awesome! :) And somewhat suspenseful...

Love, love, love! I found a few more mistakes that I overlooked... but oh well. I still love it! And hooray for Josie- I mean, Francisco! And Samantha- er, Bernardo- worries about Josie- er, I mean, Francisco- too much. Seriously, I keep mixing them up! XD I absoulutely loved it! You deserve more readers!

Peace out, homie

hetaliaforever123

Nice work! Keep it up!

This is awesome, keep writing! :)