Nice story but why not have shara beat up eddy it was his fault that Ed is now dead
:;;( R.I.P Ed

interseting story but i was wondering why not marie but anyway wee read to see how this story goes

I would love to see progress in this. I am very fascinated how being a werewolf is going to effect Double D's personality, and how his relationships with Sarah and May are going to change as well.

"I stopped because i'm getting more reviews and favorites from Naruto fics."
The Howling Behemoth in a PM he sent to me

I thought it was on hold?

A review a day. That can't be too hard right?

"Do you know why wolves howl?" asked the figure. None of the Ed's responded

I hope the Ed's responds are okay.

Anyways a bunch of wolves come out and surround the Eds and Sarah.

"There seemed to be a slightly large amount of them. It was a total of seventeen, twenty three with the wolves,"

Yeah 17 is only kinda a lot of people. So Edd decides to try to kill 23 wolves with pipe. Alone. Who is the smart one again?

"Eddy saw this and did the selfish thing, he took the pipe from Double D."

Crucify that bastard. Can you go two seconds without ranting on about how evil he is?

"Drop the pipe" spoke the leader"

"Here take it" offered Double D "Its silver you can go have it transferred into its proper currency."

"Money" one laughed "We don't need money. We have something else in mind"
The pack leader not even a minute earlier

Dante(I am just going to call him that since people like him are usually named somthing like this in fanfics.) turns out to be an idiot since he can't even remember what his clients look like. How do you become an alpha if your that stupid? And guess who said client is? Why of course its that evil piece of shit Eddy of course. Because fuck the time when he said he was sorry near and at the end of BPS or the time where he defriended Edd from the Kankers(Its okay when they treat everyone like shit because they are girls but if they were boys they would be sick rapists.)or the time where he cried when kick Edd out of his house. That last one makes sense if you the context.

"Eddy" Screamed Sarah "Get back here"

Come back to where the wolves are waiting to kill us you asshole! Ed then turns into a werewolf and fights 23 people on his by himself while Edd and Sarah do the smart thing and run off with the pipe.

"PLEASE REVIEW EVEN WHEN COMPLETE"

Your in luck seeing how I am going to review every chapter.

"The sight they arrived to was upsetting. Eddy was having Ed do all of the work himself. Ed was digging through a pile and moving heavy objects. Eddy himself was sitting on a clean pile watching."

THAT PIECE OF SHIT!

Let me ask you a question. Has Ed ever at any point shown that hates doing all the work? To be honest I think he actually likes it.

On to the story. I can't believe it took me this long to realise this. Why are the Eds bothering to look after Sarah? She can handle herself. Hell she is probabily the stongest charecter on the show. I don't think she needs anyone to look after her like how she does with Jimmy. Anyways Ed is digging or somthing and he hits his hand on a metal pipe.

"Goodness Ed, what happened?" Edd asked.

"I don't know."

You hit a metal pipe with a jagged edge.

"Well you seem to be allergic to this metal." He explained "It seems to be silver."

Allergic!? You see someone hit his hand on a broken pipe and you think hes allergic!?

"Honestly Eddy" spoke a disappointed Double D "our friend is injured and all you care about is cash."

Its a cut from a clean pipe not a knife gash.

After that mental castration someone comes over and howls.

"A wolf's how."

You forgot to type one more letter?

"To be continues"

So many thing wrong with this sentence. So many things.

Ehh. Its just another bad fanfic. Not terrible just bad though that might just be because the idea itself was not really all that good to begin so you were kinda-

"SQUEL PIG!"

"Review and some of the character could be spared. If not…"

"REVIEW IF YOU WANT TO SEE PROGRESS."

"THERE. DOUBLE D GOT TO EDDY."

"The blow sent out a spray of blood as the bones became visible."

"Edd stared at the beaten and broken boy. Even now as he lied in his own tears and blood Double D wasn't satisfied. I don't think I could ever be. He had to admit he felt a grim satisfaction at the sight.

"True Eddy" he calmly stated "I regret stopping, but that's all I regret."

"ON HOLD."

... This one is going to be out of moral obligation. Seriously treat your fans better then that.

First of all you make your hatred of eddy VERY visible. I could go a little more in depth though that would be more relavent to the latter chapters so I'll save that for them. Besides all I really need to is show this quote.

"IT WAS YOUR SCAM IDEA THAT PUT THE BRACES ON HIM."

Yes it was Eddy's scam that accidently runied Jimmy's teeth. Which Edd allowed. Which Edd helped with. Which Edd had the intention of doing to everyonelse just as much Eddy. The same Edd that did nothing when Jimmy's teeth were about to get ruined. And why does it even matter weither or not someone other then Sarah looks after him? Hes not mentally or physically disabled after all. And would you really want the same person who broke your teeth to look after you?

I'll reivew the next chapter in a few hours since my laptop is about to shut down. But seriously? You say you will update as long as you get reviews and even though you got 70 reivews you still put your story on hold after months of doing nothing?

"Eddy needed to be beaten harder next time."

The only one that needs to beaten harder then that is you.

"ON HOLD"

Why? Because you didn't get enough blowjobs?

All he wanted was to get to the one who dared to awake the berserker in him. He wanted to get his arms around them. And. Make. Him. Pay. Unfortunately for Eddy, he was that him.

"SQUEL PIG!"

"Double D put all of the force he could muster into his kick. He aimed the blow toward Eddy's knee cap. The blow sent out a spray of blood as the bones became visible. As Eddy laid on the ground crying and begging, Double D continued.

Now the Cul-de-sac kids saw what was happening. They thought that it would be a well deserved beating. Double D had no intention of stopping there."

You're a sick fuck. I bet being killed by wolfs would be less painful then this.

"Farewell Ed. Review and some of the character could be spared. If not…"

Get over yourself you smug little shit.

PLEASE PLEASE finish this story, i REALLY want to know what happens to Edd!this story is really good

Omg i want more storys I been passingthis story because I thought it be just the Edd wolf and May romantic stuff but it good I have one little suggestion can you some how make all the Kankers sisters part of Double Dee pack I mean you still have May x double Dee but it be more cooler if you can have us second guess with Lee and Marie Kanker too he can be an Alf with three beta wolf

holy crap double d... you beat the shit out of him... good job :)
this fic is good... this is also the only fic i review for because i always have something to say about these awesome chapters; other fics, not so much... i love how well you wrote the fight

This will be over soon update soon

I can only imagine when the full moon comes out Edd will become a big badas werewolf and Eddy is going to be somekind of midget werewolf.

Eddy needed to be beaten harder next time.