I like this. It is a very satisfying story to read.

I absolutely loved this! I hated the way they showed Peter being all belligerent and inconsiderate in the movie, but this was just lovely, and put such a sweet slant on it. Very well written. :)

As I've said before, you gotta love family bonding.

Great fic!

Caity :)

Can I just say that this was beautiful? Because it's one of the best pieces of Narnia fiction - of anything, really - that I've ever read. The emotions are so real, all the pain and hurt and anger and love, and it's so gritty and raw and so tangible that it makes you realize just how much the Pevensies must have suffered after returning from Narnia the first time. And I must say that I absolutely loved your version. It's creative and honest, and you have such a beautiful writing style. I hope you'll continue to write about Narnia and Peter and Edmund :)

Hey guy :] Im writting a story to do with make believe! Heres a chapter from my book Life and Death...If you like it there is more on my webpage- .com

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What are you drawing?” Damien questioned her again, she turned her head and passed him her drawing, she wouldn’t talk to him, showing him a picture isn’t talking Charlie assured herself. Damien studied her art; he traced his fingers over her pencil marks, “What’s the drawing representing about you?” he caught her eyes she knew she had to answer him but Ashley! He smiled at her then continued looking at the rough, edged heart drawing. “It’s about love….I find it amazing that one emotion can create so many feelings…love can be good or bad….it can change you …shape you as a person” Charlie pencilled in a stitch at the very end of the heart. “Love makes you strong no matter which side of it you stand on” Damien added, then he began to slowly draw a boy cradling a girl in his arm, “Love makes each person I think, it’s the one thing we can all relate to” She took the paper away from his hand, smiling she began to add colour to her picture. The awkwardness between them melted away, his soft voice was inviting and warm, he shared his jokes and thoughts with her, it was like they had been friends for years. “OK TIMES UP CHILDREN PLEASE MAKE SURE YOUR NAME IS AT THE TOP OF THE PAPER AND A DESCRIPTION IS PUT SOME WHERE ON YOUR SHEET” the teacher instructed the class. “OMG she’s actually talking to him! She just wants me to smack her face in…” Ashley growled to her friend. “DING DING” the bell for the second lesson rang out.

This was beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing!

Oh that was fabulous!

Love-love-loved it!

Dear Peter loves them all so much.

Wonderfulness!