Wait no don't delete this one! I love this and have read it over and over again! Unless its going to be the same beginning... I'll be very upset if I can't enjoy this one still. So please don't delete it!

Rewrite it? Your story? Parish the thought! Why would you do such a horrid thing? This story is so well written; the plot is interesting, the characters are relatable, it is just, overall, an amazing piece!

pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssseeeeee update! this is soooooo good. not only the story, but the writing is amazing as well. so well done!

please update soon!

Yay!
I really liked reading this chapter!

UUuuuUUuupdate

I just wanted to say I have read every chapter of your story so far on my phone (I even stay up till 3 in the morning last night reading it and that wasn't the first time I have stayed up late reading it) and have not been able to leave a review until now, but I must say, it is AWESOME! I am truly in love with your story and I can't wait for the next up-date. I am on the edge of my sit, can't wait :D

This chapter made me so happy at the end!
I love the way Loki cares for Jan!

hahahahaha, man oh man. Dick-cheese! that is pure gold! love this chapter! keep writing! :D cannot wait for next installment!

WOO HOOOOOOOOOOO!
Loki ain't going back to Asgard!
He better not! He final found a place that loves him and it makes me so happy! And thanks for updating so soon! You da best!

Hate to say it but this chapter made me feel a bit ill.
But please update soon so I dont have to sit here with these pictures of dying Loki in my head.

whooooooooooooa! ok was not expecting Odin to do that! like, even if he didn't fully mean it...wow! GREAT chapter! :D cant wait forthe next!

All I have to say is wow.
This story is well written and the way you portrayed each character was great as well! I can not believe that Odin would choke his own son! I can't wait until the next chapter!

I couldn't help but think,
ODIN WHAT THE BLOODY HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?

This is an amazing story! Well done!