Well it was a great chapter if I might say. I hope you can update soon!

Enjoyed this! nice job

This is shaping up to be a very interesting story. I once wrote a fanfic myself about Marty getting stuck in the '50s, called When Something Goes Wrong, intending to follow it up with sequels. However, it was a fairly bad story and I think I'm increasingly liking yours better.

I suppose Doc is right that Marty should try to avoid his parents, but it's impossible for him to do so altogether (as I suppose the previous chapter evidenced) and I've always liked the irony that, just like in the 1980s Marty may have sought out Doc's company as a friend to escape his parents and unhappy family, once stuck into the 1950s he might end up in a reversal of that pattern, where Doc is becoming an overprotective father figure to him and Marty starts spending more time with his friends instead - George and Lorraine.

This story looks like it can be a lot of fun. :] Personally I can easily see some angsting in Marty's future - a little whining to new-best-pal George (despite the fact that they're technically supposed to stay apart) about Marty's parents' death or permanent relocation - but that's because I can easily see some angsting virtually anywhere. I'm interested in seeing how Doc and Marty reconnect.
Anyway, great story! There are some spelling errors here and there but your characterization is great. :D

love it! really enjoyed it x

oh my god are you kidding why did you say 'drop me a review so i can improve' in your author's note YOU DONT NEED TO IMPROVE oh my god i am drowning in back to the future feels right now thank you for having this story exist

Wow, that was awesome! Just "there" should be "their" but it's not that important. Really nice job!

Aww, how tragic! But I really want to see what's going to happen next. Brilliant idea, by the way.

Are you going to finish this? It's pretty good so far.

I can't wait to read the rest of the story, this looks really promising. Update soon!

This story is amazing, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I really hope you update soon, it's already September and you updated last in June. See you next update :)

This is acully really good! Please write more!

cool, could you make a sequel were the space time continuam and he had to change time

This is an interesting idea. Will there be problems as little-Marty grows up to look just like big-Marty and George realizes it?

This is awesome! I can't wait to read more!