i really like this story, you are doing an amazing job writing it. but why did she give up the baby :((( if she didn't want him to go through what she went through, foster parents/being adopted and no idea where their real parents are, then why did she give him up. :(((( but i really hope you update soon. I am looking forward to read more.

plz plz plz update soon.

Wow! This is really good! Are you going to do it sibling style? Or best friends?
And I hope you do try to even it out. I really like August,a and having a story where your main characters don't have equal 'face time' isn't really fair on them... Plus I like August too much :P
I'm looking forward to finding out where the police are going to take them, though I think I already know the answer to that...

No! Only two more chapters?! D-:
Nice chapter though :-) I liked it a lot!
Update soon!

great chapter!

great chapter

Nice. Chapter. Update soon :)

I really like seeing August trying to take care of Emma and I like their dynamic. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Love this! Please update soon! This episode was only on yesterday in the UK X-D In the US you've probably had it for half a year or something like that.

love this story please keep updating

Nice chapter. Ty

Great story! Update soon!

Sweet! hug them both

I really felt bad for August/Pinocchio in this episode. It really was to much of a responsibility for a child to look after a newborn all alone. So far this story seems to have a interesting plot. I'm looking forward to seeing how you will make their lives different with them staying together.

Very good You protred His confussion and hope so well! This world can be scarry Espiecally for a new comer like PINichio!