This was beautiful. I'm putting it under my favorites: no negotiations.

3 Romantic!

That was cute, I liked the way you set it out. Kudos!

Absolutely gorgeous

I loved this. So very very much. :,D
This one of my fav couples and I think you really got their relationship/characters/etc spot on. They don't come together with just cuddles and unicorns, and you wrote it really well!
:D Hope you write more of them!

I am thankful to have read something so lovely.

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Very good, thanks.

Great story thank you for posting.

That was sweet

I was confused with the name of he story at first. After reading I think it's a great name. It's a lot like a lot of other stories in this pairing. That doesn't really detract from my liking it though.

A beautiful story. I realy like your idea to arrange the different sections under keywords. /touch./ and /smile./ I like best. Your story is exactly the right way divided between cute and serious scenes. Sometimes it is slightly difficult to tell what is recently happening in the scenes, especially /pain./, which I havn't quite understood jet. But nevertheless the story is great to read.

so cute. i really injoyed reading it! very sweet and nicelydone with feelings

Well written. A truly lovely story. Keep up the good work.

Beutiful, The way you wrote this is beutiful. thats all I could think about when I finshed. I almost want you to write it in a solid story as well. Not just this flowing strem of pome goodness. And yes, thats how I think of this story. In other words: I like it and its a very good story.