|Reviews for blood the second chapter|
| Guest 5/24/13 . chapter 1
cool man kai must of look old?
| shaybaum90210 4/7/13 . chapter 9
| Living in a dream i never had 1/18/13 . chapter 7
Plz continue I love it
| Serena-Abarai 1/13/13 . chapter 7
Plz more chapters nd add hagi's POV
| kyrian.blackshadow 1/5/13 . chapter 5
Your doing great my prince. As for the song ain't they dance to wellI have a few I just don't remember the titles to them I'll get back to you on that. It looks like you're writers block ain't that bad continue in my prince Ursa getting good
| kyrian.blackshadow 12/21/12 . chapter 4
Wow. This is a great story so far. I cant to read more. The first time I read the first chapter I was like ( jeeze it all one paragraph if this how the whole is made with alot of mistakes then I wont read it) but actually it got better. Think your doing a better job in a first person view than. A third person view . Keep up the good work. I mean you took the thoughts that I had after the second season ended right from my mind. I love it and will keep reading it till the end. If you want help I can give you ideas. Sincerly, Casi
| AliceXxX 11/24/12 . chapter 3
Please please please update soon! Saya and Hagi have to be my favorite anime couple!
| JinxyNightroad 9/20/12 . chapter 1
The story is good but the large block of text is a bit bothersome on the eyes. It would be better if it was separated into paragraphs.
| inksilverblue 9/8/12 . chapter 2
No paragraphs break :( but anyway, I felt that the story was kinda rushed. But I like the plot so it's fine ;3
| Esther Clemmens 7/24/12 . chapter 1
Please separate this into paragraphs, it will help your readers distinguish who says what and keep the pace of the story flowing. Nice story though, please update it soon.
| XxxNovember's SnowxxX 6/23/12 . chapter 1
I liked it but i also didn't. I think it's a wonderful concept but it was all one enormous paragraph. Honestly i got confused and distracted since the lines seemed to run together. Sometimes you didn't put quotes and others no punctuation. But i really think this story has much potential. I do hope that you'll continue to write more of this story because I really want to know what happens next.
| inksilverblue 6/21/12 . chapter 1
Umm... Paragraphs? It's a good story with an interesting plot though, keep writing!