|Reviews for xEros: Ordeal the First: Heart|
| Lovesick 9/2/10 . chapter 1
PLEASE CONTINUE! This story if awesome
| lucytiger 6/28/07 . chapter 2
come on man keep going its good
| Xellis182 6/30/04 . chapter 2
O.O ... you are a bit twisted, right? Well, I liked this fic, but I wonder what is the worst: what happens to poor Xellos, or the fact that you updated the second chapter a long moment ago, and don't seem to be going to put more soon? Argh. Well I like this fic because it's very... descriptive... and, well, original, to say the least... what happens next? What's this place Xellos is in? *cries* I want to know...
| Katie 6/20/03 . chapter 2
do you EVER plan on updating! I am getting a little impatient, that such a great story has not updated YET! PLEASE UPDATE!
| Toki Mirage 4/3/03 . chapter 2
is this the xelloss torture story? i like xelloss *blushes* a little...
any way, i wana know what happens!
| C.Anita 2/28/03 . chapter 2
Please writt more!
I'ts a greate story and I have to read what happens to Xell-kun.
Now I have review a comment so the least you can do is to continu!
| Star 12/18/02 . chapter 2
Update soon! Please! I really like you story and I want to know what will happen. Hurry! Your story is awesome!
| Shiinma 9/8/02 . chapter 2
Wow... I'm... I'm... impressed. Keep up writing. PLEASE! It's a great story! I need to know what will happen to Xel-chan!
| Zanne 7/22/02 . chapter 2
*grins a perfectly randy cheshire cat grin* This story is one of the most erotic I've read in quite some time. What an unusual and most original premise; I LOVE the way you describe base sensations, like touch and smell to define what Xellos is "seeing," what he's feeling, how he interprets what's happening to him. Alien in his new human body, he has no choice but to feel, and feel, he does. Keep up the wonderful work, lady...I eagerly await for future tidbits..._
| Arie 6/18/02 . chapter 1
wow...now that's original annnnnd interesting lol (poor xelly chan) write more.
| Prince.chan 6/14/02 . chapter 1
Ok, um, yeah, that was different. Sorry I didn't read it all. Just kinda skipped to the end to see what happened and it don't really tell you. ;
| Rackham Rose 6/7/02 . chapter 1
...excuse the pun, but the way you describe Mistress is simply delicious. (Her smell like bread, her lips like sherbet...)
The sheer sensuality of this piece is wonderful. I wish I were as good a tease as you are. _