Great take on that scene!

Well researched & a joy to read. Thank you.

Oh, that was lovely. Really, I absolutely hate Fanny after reading this.

Truly lovely writing! Thanks for this little bit of what-if, wholly in-character and just possibly able to be slipped in between the lines of canon without violating anything. Thank you! Also, nice job on the research about what would have been the technological marvels of the day. This level of quality in fanfic is rare. :)

If only it would have happened that way in the movie.

This is quite well written! It captured the time period and John and Margaret so nicely. I hope you plan to continue the story!

Hi,

This piece was well written and great word practises was used. I loved it! you've captured their true character as it was meant to be. And gave us readers that piece of story that ought to be in the book.

Well done, I loved it!

Another excellent piece. I love the tone of your writing. It really pulls me into the era.