Okay, lol, I did not see that one xD. Please update soon :D

DARCY AND TONY INTERACTIONS ARE JUST

(fangirl jumping up and down)

I'm a huge Pepperony fan, don't get me wrong, but I love reading Darcy and Tony banter. I also love how Darcy pretty much panics while keeping her cool at the same time. xD

I wonder if there's any good Darcy and Tony bantering fanfics out there...

Thank you very much for the chapter! I just love Olivia as well.

Aw! Man, you're closing up. And your muse is only speaking Grimm to you. :( I'm going to miss your Pepperony stories. Immensely. I loved this chapter. You're back on your game!

Awww cute little bit at the end! Oh and go Darcy! She is like my favorite character from Thor. Please try to add her in more, if you can, that is. So yeah...please update soon! :)

This is soooo cute at the end! And I love love LOVE how you added Darcy! Dun duh duh dah! Here comes Darcy to save the day! It was really creative to bring Hammer back and kill him with water. Technology can only be so stable (everything has a weakness, doesn't it?). Anyways, great job on this chapter. Absolutely adored it! I really hope your muse keeps its end of the bargain up. I love this story and with every chapter, the plot and your writing gets better and better! Keep reviewing! :)

AHHHHH! KNEW IT! OMG that was so disgusting too! The visual of Hammer... ewww. And the comment when he told Tony that the nanobots were going to make them one. So wrong on so many levels. And poor Darcy! What rotten luck to step into that! But he's dead now so yay! Love that Olivia and Steve were able to talk and love the fluffiness! Update soon please!

Olivia and Steve! OMG so CUTE! And yay Darcy! I like the Wizard of Oz references, very clever :D Continue at your own pace, quality is better than quantity!

WHAT a CHAPTER! So many great storylines taking place simultaneously. Let me see if I can do this justice...

1) Great scene with Steve and Tony. Tony needed to acknowlege his anger at Pepper and Steve was the perfect guy to share that scene; also glad the nurse sent Tony home to rest because he would have woken Pepper up with his fidgeting

2) Sweet, precious scene with Clint and Natasha! He is just a doll. I know, his character is lining up his bow to shoot me for that non-masculine reference, but the truth hurts

3) WooHoo! Darcy is back to keep Jane and Thor on their toes. Hope her gran doesn't have a stroke with the reverse break-in. LOL

4) Oh, you sly fox! Thought you could just sneak Betty in there like that. I can't wait to see how Bruce reacts and also what Steve does when he sees Olivia again.

5) Aw man. I KNEW he wasn't gone. :/

Needless to say, I can't wait for the next update!

Febulous background on Clintasha/Coulson/Fury! You put such great spins on otherwise ignored parts of storylines that just blow my mind. You definitely hit another home run with this chapter!

Oh Lou. I feel so ashamed I have not reviewed in weeks. I finally kicked the pneumonia and then Thanksgiving holiday and work hit. :( The good news is, it's all over and I'm pretty much back to my snarky self so lets see what I can say about this chapter. ;)

FREAKIN AWESOME! I LUUVVVV this chapter! Wheeze! Oh, you've struck platinum with Greg. And even the brief mention of Mee Moo. BAHAHAHAHA! I was rolling on the floor. Greg is definitely the Tony of that relationship! I also loved how you incorporated the "Can I keep him!" "No." Fabulous! I'm just really glad Greg had his crisis kit at hand. I don't know how Tony would have made it without all those beauty products. LOL

Great chapter! I loved reading about all of the team's and friend's support for each other, it was very heartwarming. The last scene however, not so much. Now I'm worried for Tony!

...Hammer? Hammer! NOO! Anyway, this was a really good chapter, despite what the muse refuses to tell you. I can't wait to see who the lady in the red coat is. OMG I HAVE A NICE RED COAT OMG MAYBE ITS ME.
Or myabe not.
Anyway, see you soon, MSxx

You. Are. Evil.
First, the Jane's mysterious favour, then the unknown woman outside the hospital (Is that Betty Ross? I lost track of where she is. Time to reread the whole story, I guess.)
And a cliff hanger with a potential threat in the Tower. Did Hammer (or his consciousness) somehow survived because of the nanobots? Afterall, he did proclaim/ "command" that they are one.
Hope someone will notice that Tony is in (possible) danger before Pepper wakes up; but that seems unlikely, unless it's Bruce or Happy.
Anyway, great interaction between Steve and Tony. Steve has good insights on Tony and Pepper's relationship; that reminds me of how "Precious" starts with essentially the three of them. Steve seems like a protector of the couple's relationship to me, with his old fashioned gentlemanly perspective on love that helps grounding their chaotic relationship when needed, even if it means Steve and Tony would be clashing.
Please update soon.

Well, I have to say - if this is you writing while the muse doesn't speak to you... wow, I bow my head. Your expectations to yourself must be really, really high because let me tell you, this was great!

Believe me, I've been reading fanfic on the net for 18 years now (been there when started) and your story stands out.

It stands out in the way of writing, in length, in the way you pay attention to detail, in characterization, a storyline that is very well thought through so far and in the unique humor and fun that goes with it. I am very very impressed. You sure you are not a writer for tv shows or movies?

There is just something different to your writing, if anyone asked me you really have talent.

Hope the must will return soon or at least give you some hints to finish this!

:)
Kathy

Such good angst, just what I needed to get me through this week. You are doing the fanfiction world a service through your writing.