This is so good!

Just give warnings before hand with your material. Stop apologizing. Apologizing is for small writers. You are not meant to be a small writer. If you aren't provoking someone with your writing, then you aren't really writing about anything that will have any staying power. You are on the right track. I am intrigued with this, and anticipating where you will be as a writer in a few years if you keep working at it.

I see what you did there with the titles and the summaries. Animal title and celestial summary followed by celestial title and animal summary... Yes, yes I think I like you.
And, of course, it is entirely your fault that I now love Molliarty. -sigh-

Very awesome

I woul have like that jim would stop actin gay infront of molly because it was so horrible that he sayd that he love sherlock infront of molly ...
i would have like that he stand up for her...

but it was great this chapter il give you a 8!

love you

LOVE IT!

You should put in your epilogue that jim tells molly that he loves her i would like that he would say that infront of everyone(mycroft, sherlock, jhon) just to see what sherlock and jhon have done iif they hear jim saying hes fellings to molly...
And sherlock being nice to molly when all ends just for onces love you

from.. THE ROMANTIC ONE

oh i dint notice that chapter 30 was done when i review chapter 29
It was great it was better than i imagine so im waiting verry exiting for the epilogue and i want to see what happends to Molly ... it was great you are really my favorite writter of fanfics

ps..if I have bad orthography its because i speak better spanish that Engish but i dont like to use the translator ...

i really will like if jim say to molly infroent of mycroft that he loves her just to see what he would do

I've never had such a huge pain in my chest BEFORE reading the last chapter to an amazing story. It hurts so good, as they say. I just can't believe all the feels I have for Mooly while reading this ( she's barely in it too) and how uncared for she seems to be, which is pretty cannon right now:( amazing story though. I hope and pray for more, I love your ability to tell a wonderful story.

UGH I LOVE THIS ENDING IT'S SO LIKE PERFECT BECAUSE IF HE CHOOSES OPTION ONE IT'S HEARTBREAKING AND LOVELY BUT OPTION TWO IS STILL HEARTBREAKING AND LOVELY AND LIKE OMG YESSSSSS

Well!
There we are!
WHAT a thrilling ride it's been over the past seventy chapters (since Chapter One of "The Mouse And The Spider"!) - and what a wholly satisfactory ending you've given us in this chapter, if I may say so.
I couldn't imagine how you were going to end this story (future Epilogue notwithstanding) but I was sure you'd wrap it all up very pleasingly. And so you did!
And I don't mean 'wrap it up' in a trite way, with loose ends unsecured, or people suddenly behaving completely out-of-character just to get some spurious "closure". But in a way that feels totally, satisfyingly just RIGHT (and, even better, with hints about all our favourite character's futures and with at least SOME hope for a ('happy'?) outlook for Jim and Molly.)
All in all, despite you saying at the beginning that this chapter was "more bitter than sweet" I found it very uplifting and happiness-inducing (despite this being the last chapter!) with most people (apart from the ones that died, teehee!) apparently looking forward to enjoying exploring 'pastures new' - finally escaping the prescriptive, confining behaviours they've been forced into as the entwining threads of their interrelationships unravel.
Usually in reviewing I quote the (many!) bits I've particularly enjoyed in a chapter, but somehow that seems inappropriate "here at the end of all things" (to quote Frodo) so I'll just end by saying an enormous personal THANK YOU for the past fourteen months of thoroughly enjoyable, thought-provoking, stimulating reading ... and for all the LOLs ... and for your friendship!
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And now, I settle down with anticipatory patience, to await the Epilogue!
lm
xx

oh come on i have been waiting for a long time for this chapter and its a chapter of flahbbacks...
Dont take it wrong it was great but ireally want to know waht happends with molly becuase at first you daid nobody will die... well nobody that counts or something like that and we all know that molly hooper doesnt "count"
so please upload the faster you can...
ATTE. ESME

SUERTE

Finally getting around to reviewing. Really enjoyed reading this chapter, and I'm guessing the frontal lobe that Molly discovered at Baskerville was caused as a result of the fall. I wouldn't be surprised if James has been mourning the death of Jimmy ever since.

It really does explain why James has been keeping such a close eye on his brother. I suppose that guilt also plays a factor - he didn't spend the time that he was supposed to looking after Jimmy and Jamie with the consequence that Jamie died. He couldn't have known that Jimmy was already thinking, 'what if I pushed him?'. I really don't think he had made the connection between the fall and death yet, though.

good chapter.

LOVED IT! You are brilliant!

That's a very intricate Moriarty backstory - I like it. Jim Moriarty lost himself while learning to fly. Think of all the analytic essays that could be based on that.