You do plan on continuing this, right? It's a great story, detailed and intriguing.

Pleeeaaaasssseeee update soon. Great story. Can't wait for more...

GAAAAH!
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MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!

Still have no idea where this is going but it's an interesting ride!

Increasingly tense and nail-biting. I'm usually not a fan of frequent POV shifts, but here it just flows so well, like switching cameras on a TV show, that I hardly notice it.

But what did Brody find? WTF is up with Rush? AARGH, I NEED MORE!

I'm really intrigued by this story. Your doing a great job of capturing the feel of the show and it's characters. I really look forward to reading more.

idk why I haven't been reading this but that little snippet on your LJ lead me to actually readying this.

If it turns Young/Rush can you warn me ahead of time.

Ahhh! You can't left it here! I hope to know soon how this will go on.

Really like this story. I'm glad you made this update. Thanks!

Oooh, this is so tense! Are they going to hail the ship? Please say you'll update soon, I can't wait!

This is really good. Please write more. I especially like the parts with Doctor Rush.

"Give the man a hard fact and he'd attempt to bludgeon you into submission with it"
Made me snort-laugh. Also, the ships at the end are very interesting, can't wait to read more!

You gave me the image of Colonel Young with boobs-do you know what you have done to my retinas? Other than that, it was really amazing though :)

So tense! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what's the matter with Rush, and who these new aliens are!

Interesting new story. I love how you captured that odd way Rush has when he is doing his thing-thinking. It's as if when he's focused, he is consumed by the puzzle. And the puzzle has it's own agenda.

And still Young can't connect.

Huh. What was Rush's brain trying to think when Young interrupted him by talking? Great job in capturing the characters' personalities.