|Reviews for Lily Knows|
| Midnightstarlight23 4/30/13 . chapter 18
Looking forward to reading more! Great story! D
| Bobmin356 4/10/13 . chapter 10
Well I'm throwing in the towel. "Part of his heritage" is just dumb. The funny thing is this really had potential, you were deviating farther and farther from canon.
Dumbledore should have no problem getting custody of Harry. It's obvious his parents don't care enough for him to keep him safe.
| Bobmin356 4/10/13 . chapter 8
I realize this is abandoned, but I admit to being disappointed that you intend to send Harry to Hogwarts when you have completely altered everything else in his life. One begs to ask what possible excuse is good enough to send Harry back to the place where his parents KNOW he will be in danger.
| KurosakiLuva12 3/27/13 . chapter 18
Your Harry is exactly how I'd always wanted Harry to be! Please update soon! D
| mainstreet52 3/24/13 . chapter 18
Well. This isn't a fic I've read before. I like it. :) Please keep writing!
| wyldrycharde 3/21/13 . chapter 18
Really awesome story. Don't hold your muse back.
| hentai18ancilla 3/4/13 . chapter 18
I like the inter-house relationships and networking eh has going on.
| yungatheart 3/2/13 . chapter 18
Its a good story and I am enjoying it. Well written and not full of endless explanations. A really good attempt to woo Malfoy from blood prejudice. I hope you can update sooner than later. Thanks
| ptl4ever419 2/25/13 . chapter 18
Yay! Gotta love those twins can't wait for more :)
| purple sky always 2/14/13 . chapter 18
I think that Harry getting sorted into Ravenclaw was truly the best choice for him. Draco accompanying him there was a little surprising, though.
| Moon Pix 2/6/13 . chapter 9
just wanted to know if this is going to be an harem (I hope not!)
it's just that my danger!possible-harem! alert just buzzed...
| ruby2360 1/25/13 . chapter 18
Well from some things you simply can't excape
| blackcallalily 1/9/13 . chapter 18
Awesome! I hope you update soon!
| Ophidias 1/1/13 . chapter 4
Two Japanese words into this chapter and already its annoying enough for me to decide to quit. What's the point? The only time you should use foreign words in a story is if there is no English equivalent or for names. All it does is interrupt the flow of your story while the reader either guesses what you mean or scrolls all the way to the bottom to see what the translation is. You didn't even translate all of the words you used. Fair enough harry was raised in Japan and so would use that language but that means all of his thoughts and speech should be written in Japanese too and im sure you can see what a stupid idea that is for an English story, so why pick random words here and there to do it to? I'll ask again, what's the point? Does it make you feel special? It makes you seem childish and its at the point where every anime fan on this site seems to throw in as much Japanese as possible. Is there a 'look-how-much-i-wish-i-was-raised-in-a-different- culture-that-i-dont-really-understand' competition going on that I don't know about?
Yes this was a bit of a rant but its slipping into more and more stories and its annoying as hell, not to mention bad writing.
| Ophidias 1/1/13 . chapter 3
You need to work on your dialogue. It is far too formal, almost to the point of looking like a letter or something. People don't talk like that; abbreviate, throw in the odd slang term etc. At the moment you have an interesting story and i havnt noticed enough spelling mistakes for it to become an issue.
I do wonder as to why you have the goblins address Marshall and Stephanie as sir and lady. Is he knighted by the Queen? Is she an aristocrat? If the answer to these is no then it should be Mr and Mrs.