|Reviews for Yuma's Twin Sister|
| Sonic-Yugioh Zexal-Fangirl 5/20/13 . chapter 23
Hi! I'm new here and This is awesome keep going :D
| Celtic-Yugioh-Fangirl 5/18/13 . chapter 23
OMG, I haven't been on for a week and I just saw this! Yay for the update! Another enemy, poor Yumi! A D-Gazer tattoo sounds far more easier to use than those D-Gazers. Yumi and Yuma fighting...that's really bad! This seemed to really strengthen their bond though!
The Black Mist concept is really original and interesting. One being Black, one being Mist, it does make sense. 96 is just a backwards 69, which is ying yang (balance). Black Mist being my favourite character, this chapter is one I really like! Yumi knows not to underestimate people and Yuma learned that in this chapter. Black and Mist just make me think of twincest, lol.
Yumi's Madolche deck is really cool! Love how Yumi uses it. And Guardian Eatos is one of my favourites! This is her deck, not her mothers, right? It really shows how she's growing as a duelist. Also, there's an underlying tone of how Yumi's starting to lean less on her mother and relying on strength she has. She doesn't want to lean on numbers either. Standing as her own person, Yumi's really growing as a person too.
Shark gave her a D-Pad! She tackled him :3 Seeing Yumi's reaction (Staring at his lips), I really want to hear Sharks! I'm guessing he needed a second to register what happened and finally told her to get off in his Shark-way. When they were up, he was thinking how close their lips were and how what if they kissed, and maybe start to blush but then he was like, 'I don't blush!' And just hid his affections by saying she was too affectionate. Stupid Shark! Wait, no, I love you! Yeah, just my inner mind theater.
All in all, good chapter/episode. Can't wait to see more. Oh, and I can't wait to see which pairing wins the poll. *Crosses fingers* please be bittersweetshipping. See ya!
| Nyx'sBlackRose 5/17/13 . chapter 23
Wow, I did not expect Eatos to save the day like that! And Shark was sweet to get Yumi a new Duel Disk;can't wait 'till the next chapter! :)
| Guest 5/16/13 . chapter 23
Wait wait, what about episode 21? Aren't you going to introduce Lillybot/Obomi in you story?
| Guest 5/15/13 . chapter 23
Super uber cool! This is awesome. I can't wait for the next update. But what are you going to do for the World's Duel Carnival? There couldn't be any room for Yumi in the finals, unless you already thought of it. Anyway great chapter and can't wait for the next one.
| Luna Hitsugaya 5/14/13 . chapter 23
Yay I finally caught up with the updates!
I'm be waiting for the next chapter :D
| Sonicgirl77 5/14/13 . chapter 23
THAT WAS AWESOME! Sorry. .'
Nice, I like how Yumi's grown up. She COULD have summoned a number but, she didn't. She found a way to win WITHOUT the numbers.
| Luna Hitsugaya 5/13/13 . chapter 16
I have a suggestion!
What if you put another OC and then kind of make yumi be around him a lot that way Shark can get a little bit jealous even though he doesn't want to admit it (get it?) U can decide wether to do it or not. It's ur choice besides I'm just suggesting but I don't know that idea just got into my head when I read this chapter :)
| Bookworm210 5/13/13 . chapter 23
No word can describe the epicness I have just witnessed...
ESPECIALLY WHILE LISTENING TO FREAKING AWESOME FIGHT SCENE MUSIC!
| Light-Sakura 5/13/13 . chapter 23
I forget what happens in ep. 22... I should look it up. I just look it up, okay this going to be something big!
I like your oringality here, splitting the personality up for 96! Now Yumi's duel disk is it like Rio's? (I know you change her name but it easier to spell Rio and you know what I mean if I mention her.)
When you told me a friend was going to giver her duel disk I wasn't expecting Shark! Nice surprise that I should have expect...
| YuuDesu 5/13/13 . chapter 23
Me: Well, sorry for not leaving reviews in previous chapters, I really think they're all awesome! *throws Yumi's handamade chibi plushie at her*
Miyuki(My OC): I want to meet Yumi so much, I think we could be a good pair in Tag Duel! :D
Me: Well, Rose(My OC) could meet her too...but she could be her enemy XD Anyway, don't mind her *points at angry Miyuki* and I'm waiting for a new episode! I have a song tittle that could match to the next chapter! It's "Virus" by Luca Turilli, check it out! :D
| MrTeschietto 5/13/13 . chapter 23
Me: I will now feel sorry for Yumi because of his lover.
Shark: Why? What will happen?
Me: *Shows him Episode 22 script*
Shark: WHAT THE F-
Me: Anyway... good episode as always. Can't wait for the next one _
| decode9 5/13/13 . chapter 23
That was great! Much better than what happens in the show.
| Dark Rose Princess 5/13/13 . chapter 23
I liked this chapter it was really good honestly. Keep up the good work!
| neko-kitsune88 5/13/13 . chapter 23
Another great chapter! Before I forget I am Sarah Konan Uchiha the one that talks a bit on your fb page. Good work!