Please update. This story is really good. :)

you really need to update this. its a great story

oh my, this just keeps getting better and better! CJ has his work cut out if he's going to attempt to steal Herbie XD please keep update, this is freaking awesome! 3

thi is very well written! I love your writing style and how you described herbie and Calley (so emotional!) but i can't put my finger on where Calley and all them characters are from :( despite watching all the films...unless they are your own of course! XD

This is really a great story! Please post the next chapter soon, I'm dying to read it! Thanks!

please continue this! this is the only Herbie fanfic that dosen't mention just the cruddy Lohan movie.

I think it's safe to say that CJ is the Antagonist. I like stories of a character getting something from their past. Please continue this, I love the story

Awww I'm soo happy that Calley and Herbie are starting to bond. Although its sad that a sad circumstance brought them together. I love the references to Herbie the Matchmaker :D

As for the bad guy in the story I think its JJ. Although Charisma is uh..quite the character. I don't think she intentionally wants to hurt her sister, she just doesn't know how to deal with for JJ he raced Calley and Herbie and he seemed quite curious about what was under Herbie's hood after getting beat. Not to mention he did just get toasted by a VW and a girl.

Awesome Chapter! Can't wait to read more! :)

I did read 'Smart Metal' It is very beautifully written! I love that one-shot :)

Update soon! :D

Yay! Your story is fantastic I can't wait to read more! I've been in love with Herbie for years, I've seen everything that has come out about Herbie, all the movies and recently the tv show on youtube! But Herbie Fanfics have been SOO scarce!Its a little sad to see not a lot people write stories on Herbie ;( But you got me so hooked I can't wait to see how this story develops!

Update soon!