THERE ARE NO WORDS... Just amazing. You are such a talented writer. I just LOVED IT!

I just read this whole thing through, & it is brilliant! Really, I'm in love with all the Maltara. I cannot even. Asdfjkl;skdjsaka xD LOVED IT :D

OMG! THIS IS AMAZING! I read all of it in one day XD
The only thing I noticed is that there were a lot of
periods missing throughout the story. I don't really care about that though :) You should become a writer/author! Or better yet, a writer for CoD! :D I wish this whole story actually happened in CoD. You know, like Mal forgiving Jacob and Maltara actually happening! I just can't describe how great these 10 chapters are. Keep writing! :)
-Sarah

Aww! This is by far the best story I have read on here so far! I've only just started reading the stories on here, but this one was the most realistic, this is really, *really* good!

This was too cute! And written very well! Fantastic story and I loved every moment of it! I feel like this is how the game would actually end but knowing EA and there twist who knows how it will be! Awesome story, love it!

Aww, I loved the ending. And the bit about Mal's mother and him, that was too cute! Thanks for throwing that in for me :). I was surprised when Jacob showed up but it was really sweet. Your whole story was amazing and it's definitely going on my favorites. The flashbacks were a good thing to have in there as well. Great story, I really loved it.

Rose

Awww.. This was so amazingly adorableee! I knew you were going to Molly the crap out of this chapter :D You blow my freakin' mind with the amazingness of each single chapter. They're always perfectly on point.. And there's never something bad to say about it.. Ah-May-Zing!
Ugh, I don't want to ruin this review by promoting myself, but imma do it anyway.. Check out my tumblr! 'forever-teambreezy . tumblr . com' without the spaces. I got some Mal/Natara pics up there! Think you might like 'em ;)
I'm kinda sad that your story is over though.. But I know that your next story is going to be even more amazing :D (if that's even possible...)
-Lisa

Aww so sad it's over but what a way to end it! The father son moment between Mal and Jacob was so adorable and of course Maltara so cute! Amazing writing as always :D can't wait for your future stories to come!
Jade :D x

Oh. My. God. AWWW. I LOVED the father/son moments and of course the MALTARA. :D

This story was so good :) I might try writing fanfics sometime...i'm not sure! Have you ever done nanowrimo? That's about the extent of my writing lol. Anyways great story, keep up the good work :) if you keep writing, i'll keep reading!
Kelly

Aww…I'm kinda sad to see it over; but the ending was sweet!
Great job!

—A

YES! YES! YES! Looks like Jacob Fallon is back! *excitement*
Great chapter, update soon!

—A

I'm really sorry for not reviewing the last few chapters! I really liked the last few chapters, especially when Natara was upset about not being loved and Mal comforted her. No one really writes about how Natara is affected by her past (mainly Shawn) and I like how you added that. If you're looking for suggestions, could you write a bit about Mal's relationship with his mother? I would love to see that. Also, your website is really cool and you're a really talented artist! Great chapter(s)!

Rose

But... You can't stop a chapter there... You just can't... That's mean and .. well, mean is all I can think of at the moment XD You're a big meanie Molly :( Nah, kidding!
You need to stop writing so amazingly Molly-ish, because it gets dull if I keep saying that your chapters are so damn 'amazing' .. Or I need to expand my vocabulary... Anywaaaay, IT WAS AMAZING! :D It's perfect. It ALWAYS is! It's just so Molly! Hahah
-Lisa

HopelessRomantic1994

Noo you can't leave it on a cliffhanger like that! Your killing me here! Ahhh! Lol! Seriously though amazing chapter loved it and yes Maltara magic boom! Adorable! Can't wait for your next update!
Jade xx