|Reviews for My version of Untamed|
| krizzaaaa 2/28/13 . chapter 8
during chosen whenever erik was being rude to zo i always yelled "erik stop being a bitch!" so yea
| demarco.boyd.7 2/17/13 . chapter 1
can u make a story of daruis and zoey romance though
| iluvstark 1/12/13 . chapter 8
OHMYGOSH i am dying for the next chapter, great job!
| bretney dumais 1/10/13 . chapter 7
you should so make another chapter DONT LEAVE ME HANGING!
| Wolflover235 1/10/13 . chapter 8
Oh no. I ought to punch Erik if he doesn't go get help! I hope stark makes it and yes continue! Update soon!
| TiffOdair 1/10/13 . chapter 8
Aw saddest part ever i actually liked him an dhe dies i am glad he comes back later
| Vanessa Knight 1/3/13 . chapter 7
oooh, Zoey's in trouble! i'm going to assume it's Erik or the twins or Aphrodite, because they love to ruin the mood. plus, Erik and Zoey still need to break up.
| iluvstark 12/23/12 . chapter 7
Really good , please update!
| Guest 12/14/12 . chapter 7
OH MY GODDESS! that was soooooooooooo aaaaawwwwwwweeeeeeeesssssooo ooommmmmeeeeeee!I LOVEDDDDDDDDDD IT! Or as the twins wud say LURVEEEEE
| ashley 11/21/12 . chapter 5
i thinks you should break them up. zoey doesnt even like him that much, might as well break them up...
| Wolflover235 11/15/12 . chapter 6
Wow welcome back! I liked this chapter. Random question of Starks' but update soon!
| UpInFlames4life 11/9/12 . chapter 5
I like this story, but to make this story interesting you shouldn't break up Erik and Zoeybefore the scene between Zoey & Stark, seeing Erik in a very a angry mode is what I like, I really don't like Erik because starting in Hunted he becomes very possessive, update soon
| anna 9/26/12 . chapter 4
dont break up erik and zoey...
| Tessagl 6/23/12 . chapter 5
this is really good i think you should break them up before ZoeyxStark and please update
| Wolflover235 6/22/12 . chapter 5
Lol. Now you're asking everyone else.
I don't know how you should do it. Just make them break up. Make Erik say something that upsets Zoey then she breaks up with him. Like. He could tell her that he thinks that she is already having a crush on stark. Which makes Zoey upset that Erik is being possessive. Then they break up. How was that?