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  Guest 5/13/13 . chapter 10 was kinda hopin to see more of Kroenen, he's just flippin awesome, but I co like this and can't wait to see what you do with the Golden Army |
| Guest 5/13/13 . chapter 7 i like it so far |
 keacdragon 4/30/13 . chapter 19aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh! Please update soon! Love this! |
| glustora 4/29/13 . chapter 19 Argh. Next chapterrrrr! love this fic |
| cynder1988 4/5/13 . chapter 19 Please! I beg you write more! Lol :p |
| guest 4/2/13 . chapter 19 Update soon this is so good I love it :) |
| Anubis 4/1/13 . chapter 1 Why are you just copying the script from the movies word for word with occasional input from your OC? This is really boring. |
| Blake 3/31/13 . chapter 1 This story is awful. I hope you aren't any older than 13 because if you are there's no excuse. The conversations are unnatural and halting, there's multiple spelling and grammar errors, and you've got some facts wrong - rotten eggs are actually thousand year eggs, which are fermented and therefore safe to eat, yet you state they make people sick. Also, it's Rubik's Cube, not "rubrics" cube. The storyline is lame, the main character weakly developed and almost without personality. The title of this story is not even properly capitalized. This is an example of a story that you should write just for yourself. It's sloppy and you are not a natural writer. |
| FangMichaelisS2 3/31/13 . chapter 19 Holy cheese! I love this! Please update soon! |
| GracieWolf 3/30/13 . chapter 19 SQUEEEE! new chapter new chapter new chapter! YAY! Been a while since anyone updated their stories... I need to update mine... Anywho...LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! (i may have had too much cafffine...WHEE!) GracefulDancingWolf 3 P.S. Update soon please! |
| Myengun 3/29/13 . chapter 1 "Please review as I absolutely love Hellboy and I'd love to hear that I did a good job. And if I did a shitty job, then stuff a sock in it and keep it to yourself." Not commenting on what I think of the story, I just wanted to say that when you post on a public forum, you should be prepared to open yourself up to both positive and negative reviews. Nasty reviews are one thing, but you should take polite constructive criticism in stride. If someone tells you you missed a word or your sentence structure is awkward, look at ways to improve that. Telling people to "stuff a sock in it" is rude. If you consider yourself a writer, you have to accept that feedback will come in all forms. |
| xLunaAngelWarriorx 3/29/13 . chapter 19 great chapter! cant wait for more! XD XX |
| xxxMadameMysteryxxx 3/29/13 . chapter 19 love this and i can't wait for more, update soon please : ) |
| Guest 3/28/13 . chapter 18 Dear Lordy, I absolutely love your story, and this chapter was brilliant. I love how you had Abe and Jenny just admit their feelings and then for her to be ripped away again. I can't wait for the next chapter from what I've read so far they all promise to be exceptionally good. Great work! |
| GracefulDancingWolf 3/5/13 . chapter 18 I thought i reviewed...oops. LOVE IT! I love anything that is extreamely well written and has to do with hellboy though... :) heartstopping cliffhanger yes! Please continue! GDW |
