This begs for a sequel.

This is really interesting, I hope you continue :)

First off, this story has potential to be better. Because the base storyline itself is pretty distinguished from other fics around here. However, I suggest you get a better beta. Why? I spot lots of grammar inconsistencies and what not? word choices that don't match lol try reading abundant amount of english fanfiction on your sparetime. that might help ;)

But if you ever decide to make this multi-chapter, PM saya aja yah siapa tau bisa bantu2 hehe..

Cheers! May

...stupid Loki! *Loki kick*-_-
Really nice story, a little bit short for my taste, but well written and good idea.

Is Harry immortal because of the Hallows? I wonder how Loki would react when he learns of all the time he missed that he could have spent with immortal!Harry that he instead used to avoid him (and get the Tesseract)...all that Harry lovin'...missed. lol. His face, his face when learning of all the missed sexy!times.
Please tell me there is a sequel being translated or created (and then eventually translated), please! I love this.

The story does have potential. But with the use of something that vaguely resembles English, I had trouble understanding several sentences and had to reread and reread to get their meaning. Wait for a beta or let somebody else to the translation, or it'll become meaningless.

Cheers though and good luck

All I can say is "Loki, you are a fool"

Update please

I really like it! I'm glad you translated it into English. If you want i can be your Beta.

i liked the story. though i do see where you say that english isn't your first language. but very good still.

Great story! :D Hope there's a sequal!