|Reviews for Birds Bite|
| sass box 6/21/12 . chapter 1
I really like this so far and think you've got a great idea with plenty of potential. However, there are a few things that can be off-putting to potential reader/reviewers. The story is a wall of text split into two paragraphs, which is hard to read. I had to struggle a little to get through the first few sentences.
When somebody new talks, there should be a new paragraph, and when you introduce a new thought or idea. This would make everything a lot easier to read.
However, I really like where this is going, and you're a good writer. I want to know what's wrong with Bird soon!
| elightate 6/19/12 . chapter 1
Yay! Bird stories love it!
Please update soon
| kazzyj 6/19/12 . chapter 1
well done good update soon cant wait to see where you going with this
| SpinningTop-01 6/19/12 . chapter 1
Love this story & where it is heading!
Please update soon, would like to find out what happens!