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   Edhla 5/4/13 . chapter 1I'm a massive fan of the villanelle, and this was done excellently, with some acidic imagery that really sticks in the mind. You use the verse form very well and this is well constructed. My only suggestion would be to format it slightly differently, as the "bubbles" and A/N at the bottom are a little distracting. Thank you for writing x |
| Danny Phantom's Lover 7/11/12 . chapter 1 Creative. Exciting. Surprising. |
| TheLennonMobile 6/30/12 . chapter 1 ;_; Yes. I just sent my last review, but I'll say it again, that if I were to tell you how much I ACTUALLY LOVE reading your fanfiction, I would be on the floor in fetal position sobbing my eyes out. Thank you for existing *cries* |
| cadillacslim3 6/28/12 . chapter 1 Maybe I'm not a deep enough person but I was really hoping for something much harsher. Maybe I'm weird. But I do so love the forcefulness. |
| Sapphire-sama Dreamer 6/24/12 . chapter 1 This is remarkable. Very expressive, rawly emotional (no mincing words), and also quite poetic. Excellent work Olexia! |
| Sunny Star Smiles 6/19/12 . chapter 1 This made me smile. Beam, actually. It was brilliant. Clever, tight, bewitching. You have real talent. I look forward to reading more from you. |
| Rinda 6/19/12 . chapter 1 Ok, this was friggin awesome. How r you so good? Thanx for sharing this masterpiece X |
| VampireDoll666 6/19/12 . chapter 1 I'm really not in to poetry so I tend to stay away from them. But I gave it a try and I liked it. *smiles* |
| PhantomAngelSee69 6/19/12 . chapter 1 Amazing! You capture the feelings ambivalence of Riki towards Jason in few words...amazing! |
| yin13147 6/19/12 . chapter 1 It's so beautiful. Actually when I researched the word 'villanelle' I realized that this fic is unbelievably excellent and powerful. There are no words. I'll review the others because whatever AnK fics you write, whether the characters are a little not themselves or not I am completely in love with your works nonetheless. :D |
| Nemesis La Algol 6/19/12 . chapter 1 Exactly the feeling of being torn between like and dislike, love and hate, lust and repulsion. All those feelings about Iason, the evil one. But it's quite impossible the both ever come closer, because of Iason's cruelty. He should have shown his true feelinds much more earlier -_- ... But a good fic, by the way :-) ! |
| Wragziez 6/19/12 . chapter 1 Very much love it. You manage to capture almost all of their relationship in just few words, which I must applaude to you, seeing your briliant writing skills. Looking forward to seeing more ANK fics from ya soon.:) |
