Very cool one! Great battle scenes.

Keep the good writing.

Now this right here is some bloody creative stuff. I wonder why no-one thought to do this sort of thing before. In truth, I may have been inspired a little.

Anyway, looking forward to what happens next.

Whoa. Awesome surprise here.

Keep the good writing.

Hey, pretty cool work on these matches.

Maybe, on a sequel, you can do a story with Mac mentoring LM.

Keep the good writing.

It's about time. -_-

Still liked it though

Sweetness. It's cool, and me knowing about the final opponent too, I think we're all gonna have to be ready for this. Get it? 4.3/5

Little Mac is the newest ghostbuster! Skipping the foreplay, 4.5/5!

Dude! Oi! This isn't a punch out chapter! This looks like some card game fandom. You've gotten your chapters mixed up?

awesome job on here as always. Yippee kiyay my dear literary friend! 4/5

Well, a psychic? Certainly a change in pace no? And a little Macgan moment too, wonderful. Either way, mac making his streak a large one, coming up next is Vegas baby! WOO! 4.25/5

I love this story so far! I'm totally blind and I've never played the WII version of this game, so I love all the fight details and the visual display read-outs. And I love your new characters! Maybe there could be an 80's dancer as a step up from Disco Kid. Please keep writing!

First review as an author.

Ah-hewn, I love this chapter, I'm a sucker for families.

Excited for my first story in 2 days!

Poetic quote,
How is there only one God, but not every god exists so long as their impact is never forgotten.

Myself

Sweet sweet slipery action! YOU DA MAN VILE! 4.25/5

The suspense! :P

Pirates. Sweet. 4.5/5