That's... HORRIBLE ! WHY DID YOU STOP HERE !
#cough cough# Ok. Let's begin with.. the beggining.
It's really nice ! Well written.. Er.. Sorry I'm not english so I don't have a lot of vocabulary.. But enough to tell you it was really great !

very nice. i am intresed to know how you can keep two koirs in the same univers whith out a paradox killing one of them.
and for your question aabout kira and eathen.
i say both becuse it might be a crash and most crashes go away after time. and i don't mind if it is incent or not. i just read for fu.

well from my point of view it looks like both in way of romantic and family love and i also want to say thanks to you since i always loved the pairing of ethan and kori so i'm a little (lie) disappointed in the endings so please continue this story alright i have a feeling that this story will be great