|Reviews for Spiritual Bonds|
| MewBladeXxX 11/28/12 . chapter 3
Hm... The Ghost will eat you unwillingly... Does that mean Michael is reluctant? And the Dark won't tell you the truth... That's right!
Normal won't be any help? Ouch. And the Psychic has already chosen... Sounds scary!
Have you already got all the people? Update soon, please!
| trainer bubbles 7/19/12 . chapter 3
I'm so very sorry I'm late but here is my review I still loved the chapter hmm I can't wait to learn the names of the other characters. Well bye till my next review.
| LinkHammer 7/7/12 . chapter 1
Hey I was was recommended this story by 'Captain Price'. First off let me say that this looks like it will be a rather interesting story, I quite like the concept of humans with Pokemon abilities. It will be fun to see how your main characters will develop throughout the story and I liked seeing the story through both of their POV's as it allowed the readers to get more of a feel for how each character thinks and act. The story was fairly well written with a nice easy to follow format, flowing dialouge and descriptive scenes. There were several minor spelling and grammatical errors though they did not subtract from the overall pleasure of reading the chapter. I will try to read and review the next few chapters when I have time so until then good luck and keep up the good work. Cheers,
| Luofr 7/2/12 . chapter 3
Yea the chapters keeps getting more just did what! What! What! What! What! A character dead already hmmmm, interesting. Anyway the only problem I have with this is knowing who is who. I know its still early but its confusing.
I think the definition of a poem is lines that made up of words that have some similarity. The poem you wrote all lines/stamaz has something similar. Allwell the truth isn't poem but it I think it fits the story 100%.
I sadly do not listen to KPOP, sorry. I have no idea why I put it in caps.
Question Two, who do you will win Connor or Kurogasa?
...that's a hard question. Umm s
| Speak To the Sun 6/30/12 . chapter 3
I like this chapter and really tyler holmes whatever still a good oc. Anyway i am glad you are posting the story reagulary. and i want connor to win the fight but michell should break it up right when connor is about to kill him. Tyler last name should be changed to anything maybe to jackson but please holmes really i have nothing against sherlock though. Anyway good chapter 4 star you dont deserve a 5 and good poem.
| Kalakar 6/29/12 . chapter 3
Woahhhh woah woah woah... Woah. Calm down with the caps-lock man. Just saying, you know. )
Anyway, woah... When you said the bugs in the sleeves, I imagined something a little more corny and stupid and by default kinda made me uneasy. But when I read what you imagined and what you wrote I went (pardon the pun) bug-eyed. That was intense. Also don't apologise for the poem, I mean it's way better than something I could come up with. Especially if it was on the spot.
I know this is kind of a short review (considering the previous one), but I am writing this fairly quickly.
In short, good chapter, cool it on the caps and this release was not late at all, I've seen many releases have way more time between.
Looking forward to more and keep writing! (At your own pace of course!)
| FiammaJoule 6/29/12 . chapter 3
Whoa, when did Michka become a flirt? xD Nonetheless, it was amusing to read and I thank you for accepting her as the Spirit of Ground. Michael seems like a really cool character with the way you describe him. He has an air of confidence and seems pretty casual with his strength.
Your writing is good, can't wait to see more!
| PrincessAnime08 6/29/12 . chapter 3
The poem was alright, that was creepy how bugs devoured a person
| Speak To the Sun 6/27/12 . chapter 2
Another good story whisper to the moon. Come on no battle yet ugh but i still love it. Lets give it up for Whisper to the Moon! Taco!
| Speak To the Sun 6/27/12 . chapter 1
awesome awesome awesome. i loved this chapter! man whisper to the moon you rockin it. go go go you! lol. anyway i love the spirit idea because, it shows like a sort of powe over all others trainers. Really really cool. and sorry for being late. but i hope to see my oc soon. TACO!
| Luofr 6/23/12 . chapter 2
LOVE THIS! I don't have a favorite character yet, I like to meet them all. But whoever did the characters in this chapter are just amazing.
I do think you should put gym battles. To me it has more Pokemon feel. Without it kinds feels like a fantasy story.
Two different teams of spirits? I think its a good idea, it makes since for Connor and Michael to spit. One giant group with 17 people traveling? Seens a bit big. Eight and nine people in a group looks quite right.
| Kalakar 6/23/12 . chapter 2
Not much to say about the chapter, as it is setting up the characters showing off what they can do (not a bad thing, this isn't criticism). Looking forward to seeing how that battle pans out when you do get time to write it (and are awake to do so). All in all not bad for setting up! )
Alrighty then questions eh? *cracks knuckles* Lets see shall we?
Favourite character so far? Well... Uhhh... Kind of early, not much variety and proper depth (from knowing them) to choose this quickly. However at a glance I kinda like Kurogasa, due to the air of confidence that he exudes, even if he seems a bit rude because of it.
Gyms? Ahhh... Couldn't say yes or no really. I mean if you want to, go ahead, if you don't want to, then leave them out. It all really depends on how 'on the run' the Spirit Holders will be and if the gym leaders are helping the people chasing them or not.
Two different teams? Well that all depends on how you want the story to progress. Do you want there to be some main evil 'corporation' (not necessarily a company, can be a villain) who wants them dead or their powers, etc. If you go that way you can still have two separate teams and have one influenced by said 'corporation' or have them fight each other without influence then band together and the list of possibilities goes on and on (including scenarios without a 'corporation'). So it all depends on how you want the story to progress.
Well that may have given you more questions than answers or possibly the other way around. But, regardless of whichever I did, I will leave you to ponder these things I have wrote and remember you can always PM me to hear more! (Although I doubt I could blather on much more than I am now)
ANYWAY! As I normally say... Looking forward to more and keep writing!
| Incognito-Ninja 6/22/12 . chapter 1
Great story and awesome concept :) Here's my OC:
Name: Adena Sagers
Personality: She's usually very calm and collected, and often very flirty and confident in herself. However, she tends to get angry very easily, and has a very short fuse. Though she won't ever admit it, when she picks her friends, it's because she actually genuinely likes them as friends, even though she might be a bit blunt and sarcastic towards them.
Description: fair skin and straight dark red hair that falls to her waist. Her eyes are a peircing gold. she is pretty tall at about 5'9
History: Adena comes from a very rich family in the Kanto and grew up with a mother that insisted she had to be a perfect lady. Her mother strongly discouraged her bond with pokemon, so she was only allowed an evee to play with as a child. She often runs away from home, though she hasn't been successful to escape yet.
TOP 5 Pokémon that can be Partner (they all have to be different type): Flareon[g], Fearow[b], Froslass[g], Frillish[b], Flaaffy[g] (she has a thing for pokemon that have names that start with 'F' :P)
One other Pokémon you want on team (top 5): Uh...Rapidash?
Outfit: light brown long sleeved shirt with the sleeves rolled up the her elbows under a tight dark red and gold trimmed vest, matching skirt, black knee-high boots.
Special Skills: She once set her mother's closet on fire. (No one was hurt, but her mother freaked at the result.) She's also fire proof and can't be harmed by fire.
I hope you use my OC :) Keep up the great work!
| MewBladeXxX 6/22/12 . chapter 2
I think Michael's my favorite character right now. Seems to be a pretty cool guy. I suggest you get a Beta, just to brush up those spelling mistakes. If you do get a Beta, I'll gladly help you, so yeah. No offense meant, I really like the plot so far. Keep it up!
| Darker Dusk 6/22/12 . chapter 2
This seems good. I love these 'We are protectors of Pokemon and it is our duty to protect the innocent' type of stories xD
I have an OC for normal i just went thought the reviews and I think someone submitted one for normal. Owell, I will shamelessly send you one through PM.