very good

Honestly it's not that good. An aura can't be changed in color, not by killing someone especially. It's a predestined thing. Plus, Jeremy seemed kind of...overpowered. He just suddenly had the power of Time? Josh only got that since his hook is the Sword of Aether.

This is a good story so far. I definitely see potential. However, I agree with the other reviewer who wondered why Sophie is immortal. Anyway, it's a good story, so please keep updating!

Interesting story so far. I don't exactly see how Sophie became immortal, but otherwise it seems like a possible sequel. Please update.