sweet :) thanks for sharing

Aww! What a sweet story!

Loved it! Thanks for sharing.

Just read this. It is beautiful.

Oh this was so sweet. I loved how they created so many memories around their little oasis. Honeysuckle, proposals, announcements. Along with the lemons you gave these characters real emotions...how they felt about the upcoming birth and how their lives would change. Starting a family is scary and wonderful. I also loved you gave these characters no names. Thank you for writing.

You captured beautifully those magic days before the first child arrives.

Thank you for writing, busy lady.

xx

Yes, you are forgiven, though I will be anxious what you have in store when you are able to get back to them.

What wonderful imagery, Kathie! I wish I had a yard like that! And a honeysuckle memory too. ;) As I was reading, though, I couldn't help remembering that it was suggested to stay away from stimulating the nipples in the third trimester until you're ready to deliver because it could induce labor. That certainly would have put a damper on their honeysuckle moments. LOL

And for someone who doesn't write a lot of lemons, you did an amazing job! Good thing I'm sitting on a ShamWow. :)

xo
Nan

That was really beautiful. Filled with love and sunshine.

Sweet...

testing the new review system...

Great one shot. Loved the Bella and Edward. Amazing job on this.

I really enjoyed this. You wrote such a beautiful description of the meadow and its surroundings. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Very sweet! Loved it!

Also looking forward to more chapters! ;-)

Very sweet! Thank you.

beautiful x