Awe, I'm so glad that Aly was so helpful. Thanks for updating! :-)

Whoa that cliffhanger right there was shocking. She has magic? Interesting.
Like that they spoke in Elvish for part of the chapter.
Go Aly for killing so many Orcs!
Please update soon! I really love this story!

Wow. This is amazing

awesome :D

This chapter is astounding. Keep up the excellent work.

Yay! And.. Oh. That's.. Bad.. And.. She died.. So.. Not yay.

Love it! :-)

Cool, a Great Wolf. :) interesting...
I'm glad she healed Aly. That would have been a bit upsetting if she didn't in my opinion.

This chapter is astonishing. I like the idea of the great wolves. Keep up the spetacular work.

I like him. He seems fun. :)

Amazing story! :D

This chapter is outstanding. Keep up the spetacular work.

Wow, this is...interesting...
The missing light made me curious. I also didn't quite understand that bit, but it will probably get explained later, eh?
Haha the water fight made me laugh. :)
Gimli would definitely eat the food, knowing him.
The marking are quiet curious... I keep wondering about them the most. (i.e. Where did she get them? What happened that made her so bitter about this? Etc etc)
Can't wait for more about Aly's journey! :) write more soon (don't rush though; rushed writing is never the greatest)

Amazing chapter! :D

Love it so far!

I love this. It is so good!

Oh, no! I was wrong! I thought it was Pippin and Merry!