I feel like this story is just rambling aimlessly now. It's nicely written, but I don't see a plot line anymore.

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Awww xD just so adorable! I'm glad Loki was merciful! He is really just such a great guy *sigh* btw talking chapters are just as interesting as action ones! Also, in my opinion, I totally think Loki is adorable in first giant form ... Sexy. Ahahaha also sorry if I assumed u were a girl in the last txt, I referenced u as "she" and I guess I just assume everyone is a girl cuz I am so yeah. I meant no offense! but really adorable chapter! I love the way it ended!

Ok, I haven't posted in awhile cuz I had personal stuff come up and got behind on reading. I have finally gotten caught up and all I can say is...WOW...I love it! :)

Oh btw the last 4 reviews were me, anonymous 3:30! I did not abandon u!

Oh my norse gods! That... Ew the hone sticking out! That would totally freak me out. *shudder* and I was worried about you! I got on to see if u posted and I was like "oh my god what if u died!" I was Like crap! Ohmygod! She is dead! Thx. I almost had a heart attack. Yup. I was like "should I call 911?" but anywho, thx for the two chapters:) such adorable Loki and leera moments! Eeek! xD so I cant wait to see loki's wrath on the guards... Or his lack of. Ahahaha wouldn't it be funny if he cried his heart out to them? (random thought ik, but if u picture it in ur head it is really quite funny:) lol. Here I go ranting! Well u did a great job as always and I thoroughly enjoyed reading (as always;) and I really hope you feel better!

Just so sad yet adorable and I don't know what to feel! Darn u wrenching my emotions around! So great chapter :) it takes a lot of skill to conver feelings to the reader through the character's emotions! Great chapter!

For a moment I thought leera was going to die... I was like Noooooo! No nononono! Then I was like oh. Aww. Bwaaaaa! So yup. just am emotional wreck right now... but great chapter! Definately not a disappointment:)

Just... Too... Adorable! I might die of cuteness xD awww I loved it... So cute. Actually if u envision the part with Loki and leera on the floor, it really is quite hysterical! I mean, everything seems funny at 2 am but... Wonderful chapter! So cute!

I must admit I'm getting anxious for the birth of the new baby! I can't wait for the next chapter...the last few have been wonderful! :)

Bwahahahaha! Loki having to explain pregnancy! "how does it come out?" ahahaha I can just picture Loki explaining it! Leave loofney a book? Well that would be more awkward. Lol. I almost died. And whoa... Thor! Kissing someone he just met? Hahaha suprisingly I could actually see him doing that lol. I loved this chapter xD great job

Awww xD just ... They r just such a mischevious adorable couple! And (I ride horses) as we say at riding... It sounds as if Loki attempted to squirrel but failed. Ahahaha I thought that was such a funny scene. (ik I am such an awful person) but I am so excited for the sequel and how you will end this story! Eeeekk

I loved the action in this chapter...even though Loki did get injured! As always I look forward to the next adventure! :)

Whoahohoho cliffhanger. Grahhhh! Darn u! ;D now I must wait! And leera? I honestly have no idea where u will take this (which is totally awesome) and might just pull out my hair. So. If u get an angry email requesting a wig. .. You will know why. Great chapter!

Damn...those pregnancy hormones always attack suddenly! I love there little spats cuz I know make up time is not far away! Anyway I love it, but I hope Leera apologizes to Loki...can't wait for the next chapter! :)