| Reviews for River Rocks or Wishing Stones |
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sassymouse 5/5/13 . chapter 4YES! Finally another chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next, just one thing. Can you please update often because I can't get enough of this. |
Blu Taiger 5/1/13 . chapter 4Well, this has certainly been an interesting story; think I'll stick around to see how it turns out. One thing I'd like to mention, though. In this chapter, it appears that Pooh and Piglet (and apparently Owl and Eeyore as well) have joined the rest of the group without any mention of how they got there or where they came from; I mean, the chapter just opened and there they were - like, poof. Also, I notice that this chapter has a lot of dialog without mentioning who's speaking. Now for readers who are familiar with the characters, this isn't much of an issue; but still, as a writer, you should make it unquestionably clear who is speaking. All right, that's all the criticism I have - otherwise, good job. |
Fizzy Starburst 4/24/13 . chapter 4You write Rabbit phenomenally. (And this is coming from someone who's RPed as him for 3 years) I love the way you write all the characters in this universe. I especially like that this chapter was more character focused, rather than action focused. It gave you a chance to showcase who well you can write everyone. I love the little plot twist at the end. I'm really looking forward to where it's going to go. I can already tell that it's going to be a fun plot :) To be honest, I kinda forgot all about this story, but it's very well written and I hope you get the chance to update it soon! :D |
Half-Full117213 4/23/13 . chapter 2To Tigger's Buddy :') That...was...beautiful. I am making my first fanfiction...EVER...Winnie-the-Pooh. 3 |
Half-Full117213 4/23/13 . chapter 4Yes! Have been waiting for update! Thank you! :D |
Rabbit TiggerDUNCNEYpokemonMay 4/11/13 . chapter 1Please keep going with this story! :) and make it tigger/rabbit fluff! |
Guest 4/4/13 . chapter 3 Please continue! |
Guest 2/3/13 . chapter 3 I'm loving this keep going. update soon. |
Silvermoss94 1/25/13 . chapter 3Wow, that's really good! It's different from what I had originally expected but you still pulled wonderful three chapters! I also like how you kept all of the characters in-character. I know that's a bit difficult at times so nicely done! I hope you continue with the story and thanks for sharing! Silvermoss |
welcometoupsidedown 1/14/13 . chapter 1Ahhhh I love this! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens to the gang next :) |
Fizzy Starburst 9/26/12 . chapter 3I find myself really liking this. It's an interesting premise, I'm really interested in seeing how it develops from here. |
FrittzyCrazy 9/14/12 . chapter 3Fabulous Job, my friend! I9 do hope you will continue and Update Soon! I love this story! |
xXOrangeCatXx 8/18/12 . chapter 2Derp! Write more! This is really good :) |
FrittzyCrazy 8/15/12 . chapter 2Great Job!Please Update Soon! This is a great story! |
Steena the Cat 8/8/12 . chapter 1Ooo...o.o I'm going to be saving this for later. :3 I like the way you write btw...are you really studying in animation btw? I'm an art major/creative writing minor myself...and I've been a bit fascinated by animation. :D |