Ok I cried - am still sniffing in fact. That was so sad, so moving - brilliant job.

CLIFFHANGER! ugh.
well, just let me say, your writing flows in the most beautiful, heartstring-tugging way. It's excellent, sad, and makes me want more.

This is just absolutely beautiful. You can hear and feel the pain and emotion. It makes my heart ache...and I love, love, love this. Update soon. :o)

I really love this chapter. :) It was totally worth the wait. The way you depict the stages of grief and healing is flawless. Beautiful!
-Tali

CLIFFHANGER! I like it :)

I don't think it's stupid. It's true emotion of a broken person. You go through each day until it either gets better or it ends. Great writing. :)

This is sooo sad :'(

i think Clint's getting a little crazy, but whatever :)

YOU KILLED HER. WHAT? aaagggh. I guess you needed it to add to the sad feel - i think i might've felt tears prickling at the corner of my eyes

Oh my god! That is insanely sad but yet so good!

;n; You just LOVE making emotional people like me cry...

I read it, and I love it. It is so brilliant and emotional, just my cup of tea. It sort of reminds me of the book I'm writing, where my main character is battling with the loss of her younger brother. It would be an honor to beta whatever comes next.

-cries- I usually don't get physical with stories or movies, but lets just say it's raining on my keyboard right now.

Yes, I did nearly cry. My eyes are wet.

truly beautiful.