|Reviews for The dawn of a new adventure|
| Luckenhaft 6/23/12 . chapter 1
I can't take it anymore! GET A BETA YOUR STORY NEEDS ONE! there are so many grammatical mistakes that it is driving me nuts!
| Greywing44 6/22/12 . chapter 1
Good chapter...my oc could beat yours though(Smirk)good humor too and good keeping them in charecter
| Mr.Buck Buck 6/20/12 . chapter 1
SO far i'm loving what I did with the two new characters what do you guys think?