I was laughing really hard when i read chapter 3, when her sister broke her tooth. On my iphone, right underneath the story was an add. "Need a new dentist?" Lol!

This shouldn't be in Soul Surfer. I know it uses the similar storyline, but unless it uses the characters from the movie, it's in the wrong category. If it belongs to another TV show or movie, put it in there, and label it 'inspired by Soul Surfer'. Otherwise, put it in Misc. or on

Either way, you still have a really good story. Great start!

Update soon!