|Reviews for Appearances can be deceiving|
| deborahherreram 4/7/13 . chapter 7
awesome..i want more ...will be great see the fight,when he removed her the cloth and when he's going to pull her to the depth! the closest scenes i mean
| thglover123 1/27/13 . chapter 7
I'm giving this a go. This is actually really good just make sure to keep on updating!
| jinxed 1/13/13 . chapter 7
LOVED it! :) xd
| WilliamsTori 9/12/12 . chapter 7
Really good writing! But can you speed up the Petris scenario?! 33
| trobiasforever 7/21/12 . chapter 7
Ye good chapter, i really liked your description of christina shooting it really painted a clear picture in my mind :-)
One thing, when you refer to peter as "the raven haired boy" it can be kinda confusing, i can never tell whether you mean peter or not?
Good luck with the next chapter :-)
| trobiasforever 7/16/12 . chapter 6
Really good chapter! I like the way you describe peters determination its spot on! And the description of tris in bed was really well written, i could really picture her in my head :-)
Please update soon, ut enjoy your holiday!
| trobiasforever 7/15/12 . chapter 5
Sorry was away so didnt review in a while... The last couple of chapters have been good though :-) keep it up!
| Guest 6/30/12 . chapter 3
write another one soon please! ur amazing!
| Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 3
any more chapters?
| trobiasforever 6/24/12 . chapter 2
I really liked this cos you made the test different from the book by adding new senarios so it was really interesting to read :-) well done!
| wiwo40514 6/21/12 . chapter 1
u took my idea :P but u probablyr wrote it better then i would've! its really good!
| trobiasforever 6/21/12 . chapter 1
I like this:-) update please, but you have quite a few typos so mabye keep an eye out for that!