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jess
2007-11-12 . chapter 1
reminds me of suger and spice and all far more nice
informative geek
2007-01-15 . chapter 1
actually, sugar rushes DON'T exist. You get a small ammount of excess energy, to be sure, but it is actually the person mentally psyching themselves up believeing to get a sugar rush, that causes the high. It's the same as when you drink an energy drink, nd you're energetic right away. The drink itself doesn't kick in for a good half an hour, it's your brain that's energetic before that.

Just a tidbit of knowledge.

Good story though. Cute.
blackdeadrose
2006-04-01 . chapter 1
Great story, you should finish it. Because in my opinion is not finished yet. Loved it.
Emma
2005-08-25 . chapter 1
Loved your story! It flowed really well.
One thing bothered me though. "Carbohydrates would dutifully start to break down the sugar"
Wouldn't that be the sucrase, maltase and lactase that's breaking down the sugars?
Other than that, your story's brilliant.
Melody
2005-08-22 . chapter 1
Love your story! I thought it was hilarious! Really great job! I hope you write more stories like this! I look forward to finding another story by you! Toya&Yuki forever!!
Dark Card Mistress
2005-08-04 . chapter 1
Waa~ lovely story!! =3 yea~ suger highs so do exist, i haf one at least once or twice a week. lol. love the story!! ^^
Rinoki Rio
2005-05-14 . chapter 1
woohoo! *dances*
Lotsa fun in this fic ^o^
You got more?
I'd like to have more!!
=^-^=
Great fic!
Bye-cha ^o^
Elihice
2005-03-12 . chapter 1
This was great. Funny and wel in character
Hakiri-Nefertiri
2005-01-15 . chapter 1
Hermione: Sugar Highs do exist
Nefertiri: They do, I have witnessed my Hikari on one once. The poor people around her could do nothing but watch as she ran bach and forth from ether side of the theater.
Hermione: That's what I get when I eat poptarts on an empty stomach and after a marching competition. I'd have been asleep in seconds had I not eaten that small amount of suger.
Nefertiri: ether way, the fic was interesting. It sent my aibou into a fit of giggles so that means she was pleased.
Mel-chan-of-doom
2003-11-17 . chapter 1
I noticed that this was like...a year and a half old...but I had to review anyway! made me soo happy..yay shounen ai galore...I really needed some Touya/Yukito fanfiction. Thanks to this, my craving has been satisfied.
firedraygon
2003-08-10 . chapter 1
^_^ So cute! Heheh, sugar-high Yukito is dangerous. So DID Touya get fired? Heh, please write more soon!

~firedraygon97
LTGMars
2003-07-22 . chapter 1
*goes into Shameless Fangirl Mode* Aside from the shounen-ai, this story was really well-written. Your capitalization of Certain Phrases made the story all the more humorous, and the overall effect was just Cute Beyond Words. ^^ I really enjoyed this one. *squirms around happily*
Akari
2003-06-05 . chapter 1
Oh, S+S obssessed peeps can just naff off for once! There are few things so good in life as a well-timed Touya/Yuki fluff fic, so say I. *nods head decisively*
Very good, m'dear, I applaud you! *clap clap clap* ^_^ I giggled practically the whole way through... *still chuckling* The idea of Yuki on a sugar high... *all coherent thought melts away in a rising fizz of laughter* See, that'd normally be bubbling laughter, but this was a new form of giggle. It fizzes!
Excellent stuff, anyhoo. ^_^ Muchly enjoyed. ^__^ Final line being the icing on the... *chortle* cake... *helpless giggles again*
*Touya appears, sweatdropping a little, dragging a hyper Yuki, and uses his free hand to drag the hyper Akari away too before she giggles so much that she starts hicupping*
Ja ne!
*Touya just shakes his head and keeps going*
Yue T. K. Sumeragi
2002-08-26 . chapter 1
sugar hight -does- exist, and I've got LOTS of things to prove it. a nce way to get sugar higt (for me) is eating too much chery (you know, those cherry you,r suppose to put only one one your ice cream? well, take that to 20 and here you go ) and I do hope the sequel is comming.
Chiharu
2002-08-01 . chapter 1
Ouuu... WAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Sugar high does TOO exist. xD Except I'm usually always hyper. My normal personality is that of a normal super-hyper person. No one has ever seen me *truly* hyper. Whehehehehehe... >) Great fic!!

Chiharu-chan
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