|Reviews for Don't Hold Your Breath|
| SkittleLuvr.x3 8/6/12 . chapter 9
No! Sequel! I love Steve, but Loki should get the girl
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 8/6/12 . chapter 9
| LittleMissZero 8/6/12 . chapter 9
Aw, I don't want it to end!
| LittleMissZero 8/3/12 . chapter 8
| forget-your-woes 7/26/12 . chapter 8
Aw Eir and Cap are so cute(: Please keep continuing with this story, I love it! :D
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 7/20/12 . chapter 7
Love the son part
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 7/16/12 . chapter 6
| Guest 7/16/12 . chapter 6
Aw, no, Eir! Don't think that! :(
Oh geez, that was the saddest part of the film.
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 7/13/12 . chapter 5
| LittleMissZero 7/13/12 . chapter 4
I love how Eir says to Bruce, "Really? Is it safe to demonstrate?" You, my dear, are FUNNY! And Eir once again faces any task with a no-nonsense attitude. She is a really strong addition to the group.
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 7/11/12 . chapter 4
Damn that a bit funny
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 6/30/12 . chapter 3
Loki is going to 'kill' her now isn't he?
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 6/27/12 . chapter 2
A lovers spat
| LittleMissZero 6/23/12 . chapter 1
I had matched Loki with Eir as well. Very sweet story. Mind your spelling of the words "your" and "you're". Where is the rest of the story? I would like to know the ending!