|
| Reviews for Don't Hold Your Breath |
|---|
   SkittleLuvr.x3 8/6/12 . chapter 9No! Sequel! I love Steve, but Loki should get the girl |
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 8/6/12 . chapter 9 Sequel! |
| LittleMissZero 8/6/12 . chapter 9 Aw, I don't want it to end! |
| LittleMissZero 8/3/12 . chapter 8 Another triumph! |
| forget-your-woes 7/26/12 . chapter 8 Aw Eir and Cap are so cute(: Please keep continuing with this story, I love it! :D |
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 7/20/12 . chapter 7 Love the son part |
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 7/16/12 . chapter 6 Oh dear |
| Guest 7/16/12 . chapter 6 Aw, no, Eir! Don't think that! :( Oh geez, that was the saddest part of the film. |
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 7/13/12 . chapter 5 Fast pase |
| LittleMissZero 7/13/12 . chapter 4 I love how Eir says to Bruce, "Really? Is it safe to demonstrate?" You, my dear, are FUNNY! And Eir once again faces any task with a no-nonsense attitude. She is a really strong addition to the group. |
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 7/11/12 . chapter 4 Damn that a bit funny |
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 6/30/12 . chapter 3 Loki is going to 'kill' her now isn't he? |
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape 6/27/12 . chapter 2 A lovers spat |
| LittleMissZero 6/23/12 . chapter 1 Hi there- I had matched Loki with Eir as well. Very sweet story. Mind your spelling of the words "your" and "you're". Where is the rest of the story? I would like to know the ending! -LittleMissZero xo |
